Jan. 13, 2022
Simple thoughts (updates on my siberian kitchen)
Right now I've got no pretty or interesting story to share, so I am just writing down some simple thoughts which I am having right now. Yesterday I helped a friend of mine to get some cupboards on the wall. Therefore we had to drill some holes and get in there some rawlplugs. The adherence of the cupboards was pretty simple.
When I have a look at my apartment I have to admit that I should tidy it up pretty soon. There is too much stuff lying around.
After this section of writing, I will do some sports. Therefore I will run along the river which is separating the city I currently live in into two parts. The upper part in which I am living is smaller but Is highly preferred by me. However, there isn't much of a difference as there are enough bridges crossing the river.
Well, I just remembered guys, I have some updates I want to share regarding my kitchen. As you probably remember, currently the kitchen which I, and my flatmates are currently owning/using/sharing (which fits the most?) can be most certainly described as a very old one from the outer parts of Siberia. I have put in much time to find a new one. This was quite a challenge, as my flatmates don't want to spend much money. Regardless I have found a very good looking one and after negotiating to 250€ and having spent the first look on it I agreed to buy it. The best thing is, that we will have to do it after my exam time is over. So I have enough time to concentrate on the important stuff right now.
Thank you for correcting! I hope you have a wonderful day :)
Yours
Richard
Right now I've got no pretty or don't have many interesting storyies to share, so I am just writing down some simple thoughts which I am having right now.
Yesterday I helped amy friend of mine to getattach some cupboards on theto a wall.
Therefore we had to drill some holes and get in therefit some "rawlplugs." in them
I'm not sure what are rawlplugs, so I can't say for sure if it's correct or not.
The adherence of the cupboards was pretty simple.
When you adhere, you generally adhere to a law or to commands, stuff like that. So I'm not sure what you mean by 'adherence' here.
After this section of writing this, I will doplay some sports.
play sports sounds more natural
ThereforeAfterwards/So (depends on what you mean) I will run along the river which is separating the city I currently live in into two parts.
Therefore sounds very formal in this case.
The upper part in which I am living is smaller but Is highly preferred by me prefer it like that.
However, there isn't much of a difference as there are enough bridges that span acrossing the river.
As you probably remember, currently the kitchen which I, and my flatmates and I are currently owning/using/sharing (which fits the most?)sharing can be most certainly described as a very old one from the outer parts of Siberia.
"my friends and I"
I have (to?) put in much more time to find a new one.
Regardless I have found a very good looking one and after negotiating to 250€ and having spent the first look on itlooking at it for the first time, I agreed to buy it.
The best thing is, that we will have to do it after my exam time iss are over.
Feedback
You tend to mix formal and informal styles (same problem I have with my languages), as well as use some constructions that don't sound very natural but great effort! :)
Jan. 14, 2022
Thank you! Hope I am able to return the favor!
Jan. 15, 2022
Is your native language Russian or German?
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Simple thoughts (updates on my siberian kitchen) |
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Right now I've got no pretty or interesting story to share, so I am just writing down some simple thoughts which I am having right now. Right now I |
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Yesterday I helped a friend of mine to get some cupboards on the wall. Yesterday I helped |
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Therefore we had to drill some holes and get in there some rawlplugs. Therefore we had to drill some holes and I'm not sure what are rawlplugs, so I can't say for sure if it's correct or not. |
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The adherence of the cupboards was pretty simple. The adherence of the cupboards was pretty simple. When you adhere, you generally adhere to a law or to commands, stuff like that. So I'm not sure what you mean by 'adherence' here. |
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When I have a look at my apartment I have to admit that I should tidy it up pretty soon. |
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There is too much stuff lying around. |
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After this section of writing, I will do some sports. After play sports sounds more natural |
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Therefore I will run along the river which is separating the city I currently live in into two parts.
Therefore sounds very formal in this case. |
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The upper part in which I am living is smaller but Is highly preferred by me. The upper part in which I am living is smaller but I |
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However, there isn't much of a difference as there are enough bridges crossing the river. However, there isn't much of a difference as there are enough bridges that span across |
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Well, I just remembered guys, I have some updates I want to share regarding my kitchen. |
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As you probably remember, currently the kitchen which I, and my flatmates are currently owning/using/sharing (which fits the most?) can be most certainly described as a very old one from the outer parts of Siberia. As you probably remember, currently the kitchen which "my friends and I" |
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I have put in much time to find a new one. I have (to?) put in much more time to find a new one. |
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This was quite a challenge, as my flatmates don't want to spend much money. |
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Regardless I have found a very good looking one and after negotiating to 250€ and having spent the first look on it I agreed to buy it. Regardless I have found a very good looking one and after negotiating to 250€ and |
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The best thing is, that we will have to do it after my exam time is over. The best thing is |
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So I have enough time to concentrate on the important stuff right now. |
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Thank you for correcting! |
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I hope you have a wonderful day :) |
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Yours |
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Richard |
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