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Starissaa

March 10, 2023

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Silence

Unknown sounds in the middle of the day from unknown places, like unknown dryness in your throat and unknown dreams which you can't track them, and unknown feelings when you don't have any. How can I survive a day full of unknowns?

Echos of silence with yawning and deep breathing. Signs of a sleep invitation which is contain unknown dreams.

How can I?

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Silence

Unknown sounds in the middle of the day from unknown places, like unknown dryness in your throat and unknown dreams which you can't track them, and unknown feelings when you don't have any.

How can I survive a day full of unknowns?

Echos of silence with yawning and deep breathing.

Signs of a sleep invitation which is contains unknown dreams.

How can I?

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This is very pretty! Well done!

Unknown sounds in the middle of the day from unknown places, like unknown dryness in your throat and unknown dreams which you can't track them, and unknown feelings when you don't have any.

"unknown dryness in your throat" is kind of a strange concept. Unknown dryness implies you don't realize it's dry. Something like mysterious dryness would imply you don't know why it's dry. That would make more sense, but poetically doesn't work as well.

How can I survive a day full of unknowns?

Echos of silence with yawning and deep breathing.

Signs of a sleep invitation which is contains unknown dreams.

How can I?

Silence


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Unknown sounds in the middle of the day from unknown places, like unknown dryness in your throat and unknown dreams which you can't track them, and unknown feelings when you don't have any.


Unknown sounds in the middle of the day from unknown places, like unknown dryness in your throat and unknown dreams which you can't track them, and unknown feelings when you don't have any.

"unknown dryness in your throat" is kind of a strange concept. Unknown dryness implies you don't realize it's dry. Something like mysterious dryness would imply you don't know why it's dry. That would make more sense, but poetically doesn't work as well.

Unknown sounds in the middle of the day from unknown places, like unknown dryness in your throat and unknown dreams which you can't track them, and unknown feelings when you don't have any.

How can I survive a day full of unknowns?


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Echos of silence with yawning and deep breathing.


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Signs of a sleep invitation which is contain unknown dreams.


Signs of a sleep invitation which is contains unknown dreams.

Signs of a sleep invitation which is contains unknown dreams.

How can I?


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