April 8, 2024
Sick
I've been sick for three days.
It was in the hotel at an altitude of 1024 meters, I suddenly woke up at midnight and found myself sneezing with allergies, in the meantime I had a stomachache.
My friend gave me some pills. They stopped my sneeze but not my stomachache.
I could not fall asleep again until almost 5 in the morning.
It's terrible to get ill during a travel.
我病了三天了。
在海拔1024米的酒店里的时候，我半夜突然醒来，发现自己打喷嚏过敏，同时肚子疼。
我的朋友给了我一些药片。他们止住了我的喷嚏，但没止住胃痛。
直到凌晨5点我才再次入睡。
旅途生病真是太可怕了。
Sick
I've been sick for three days.
It was in the hotel at an altitude of 1024 meters, when I suddenly woke up at midnight and found myself sneezing with allergies, in the meantime I had while having a stomachache.
My friend gave me some pills.
They stopped my sneezeing but not my stomachache.
I could not fall asleep again until almost 5 in the morning.
It's terrible to get ill during a travel.
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Oh no, hope you feel better soon!
April 9, 2024
Thank you! I feel much better today.
Sick
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I could not fall asleep again until almost 5 in the morning.
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Oh no! I hope you get well soon
April 9, 2024
Thank you!
I feel much better today.
I've been sick for three days.
It was in thein a hotel at an altitude of 1024 meters, I suddenly woke up at midnight and found myself sneezing with allergies, inat the meansame time I had a stomach ache.
'It was' is not needed here.
Since you haven't specified which hotel already, use 'a' instead of 'the'.
'In the mean time' usually refers to something happening while waiting for another event to occur, or instead of something else: 'The train arrives in 1 hour, so in the mean time I will read a book'
My friend gave me some pills.
They stopped my sneeze but not my stomach ache.
I could not fall asleep again until almost 5 in the morning.
It's terrible to get ill during a travel.
You can also write, 'It's terrible to get ill during a trip'.
'Travel' = indefinite, general (don't use 'the')
'trip' / 'vacation' (USA English) / 'holiday' (UK English) = definite, specific instance of traveling. (use 'the' or 'a')
April 9, 2024
Thank you! I learned a lot from your feedback.
Sick
I've been sick for three days.
When It was in the hotel at an altitude of 1024 meters, I suddenly woke up at midnight and found myself sneezing with allergies, in the meantime Iand I also had a stomachache.
My friend gave me some pills.
They stopped my sneeze but not my stomachache.
I could not fall asleep again until almost 5 in the morning.
It's terrible to get ill during a travel.
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I hope your stomachache gets better soon!
April 9, 2024
Thank you!
I feel much better today.
It was in thea hotel at an altitude of 1024 meters,. I suddenly woke up at midnight and found myself sneezing with allergies, in the meantime. Also, I had a stomachache.
They stopped my sneezeing but not my stomachache.
It's terrible to get ill during awhile traveling.
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This was really well written. I think to improve the flow and make it sound a little more natural you could move the sentence "I've been sick for three days." to the end and place it just before the final sentence; e.g., I could not fall asleep again until almost 5 in the morning. I've been sick for three days. It's terrible to get ill during a travel.
April 8, 2024
Thank you for your corrections and feedback!
Sick
I've been sick for three days.
It was in the hotel at an altitude of 1024 meters,. I suddenly woke up at midnight and found myself sneezing with allergies, in the meantime I and I also had a stomachache.
My friend gave me some pills.
They stopped my sneezes but not my stomachache.
I could not fall asleep again until almost 5 in the morning.
It's terrible to get ill during a travel.
April 8, 2024
Thank you!
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