This can be the title ofis a phrase that I have been followed my whole life. The title is a phrase that I have followed my whole life.

'have followed' or 'have been following'

This can be the title of a phrase that I have been followed my whole life. This can be the title of a phrase that I have followed my whole life.

You could say: that I have followed OR that I have been following

I had convinced myself to getmanaged to reach my hardest goals in life with this oin mind. I managed to reach my hardest goals in life with this in mind.

I had convinced myself to getachieve my hardest goals in life with this oin mind. I convinced myself to achieve my hardest goals in life with this in mind.

"get goals" isn't a common way to say what I think you mean; you could say pursue my hardest goals OR achieve my hardest goals OR go after my hardest goals OR strive toward my hardest goals Those are just some alternatives.

And, let meI would like to express, that it really worked!… aAnd still works for me. And, I would like to express, that it really worked!… And still works for me.

And, lLet me express, that really worked!…, and it still works for me.! Let me express, that really worked, and it still works for me!

In oral communication, we often start sentences with conjunctions like "and" or "but," but not as much when writing. Also, the "..." ellipsis is usually used in the midst of a sentence, rather than after a punctuation mark.

Life has surprises and different tones in the scaleshades of gray, a. Although, many of the purposes and duties that I had pursued, were accomplished step by step, s. Sometimes ahead, sometimes behind, t. Taking and releasing, praying and making big mistakes. Life has surprises and different shades of gray. Although many of the purposes and duties that I had pursued, were accomplished step by step. Sometimes ahead, sometimes behind. Taking and releasing, praying and making big mistakes.

Life has surprises and different tones in the grayscale of gray, although,, but many of the purposes and duties that I had pursued, were accomplished step by step, sometimes ahead, sometimes behind, taking and releasing, praying and making big mistakes. Life has surprises and different tones in grayscale, but many of the purposes and duties that I had pursued were accomplished step by step, sometimes ahead, sometimes behind, taking and releasing, praying and making big mistakes.

It is not very common to use commas as often as here; you've made some decisions to develop your own writing voice, so we're not strictly bound to standard grammar conventions, but the commas I removed were, I believe, unnecessary and disruptive.

But, above all, I felt grateful to have my loved ones by my side, t. They arhave supportinged me until now,: holding my hand in bad times and cheering me up in good times. But, above all, I felt grateful to have my loved ones by my side. They have supported me until now: holding my hand in bad times and cheering me up in good times.

But, aAbove all, though, I felt grateful to have my loved ones by my side, and they are supporting me until now, holding my hand in bad times and cheering me up in good times. Above all, though, I felt grateful to have my loved ones by my side, and they are supporting me until now, holding my hand in bad times and cheering me up in good times.

If you are describing how you currently feel, this would be better: Above all, though, I feel grateful to have my loved ones by my side, and they are supporting me still, holding my hand in bad times and cheering me up in good times.

One sStep at a tTime One Step at a Time

One sStep at a tTime One Step at a Time

In title case, the first word, last word, and any important words (like nouns and verbs) in between are capitalized.

Now, tTo my kids, that are now in a kind of hurry to get reach their goals rapidly, I use to, I state, O one step at a time…. To my kids, that are now in a hurry to reach their goals, I state one step at a time.

Now, to my kids, that are now who are in a kind of hurry to getpursue their goals rapidly, I use to state, Osay, "one step at a time…." Now, to my kids who are in a kind of hurry to pursue their goals rapidly, I say, "one step at a time…."

From what I can tell, an ellipsis at the end of a quote still needs an ending punctuation mark (here, a period). Also, "are in a hurry" is in the present tense, but "use to say" or "used to say" (use to say is not correct) is in the past tense. The tense should match in this case. You can either say: "kids who were in a hurry" ... "I used to say" OR "kids who are in a hurry" ... "I say" Lastly, "state" isn't wrong, but it is rather uncommon to see it used in this informal scenario.