May 5, 2025
Shuangqing Bay Park
Shuangqing Bay Park is situated in the central area of Fuyang’s South New District and occupies an area of about one thousand mu. In the center of the park, there is an artificial lake.
Here, it used to be farmland and villages. Around 2018, the local government decided to develop the South New District, so the park started to be built as a supporting facility of the new district. As a result, farmlands were converted to construction land, and villagers were relocated to other places.
Now, around the park, there are many residential and office buildings. Fuyang Museum, Fuyang Science and Technology Museum, Fuyang Grand Theater, and Fuyang Library are located at the four corners of the park.
The artificial lake covers an area of about 360 mu. Inside it, there are various water - plants, and around it, there are many different trees, flowers, and bushes.
Entertainment activities in the park include light and water shows and night cruises. To the west of the park, there is a water street, which is a commercial street lined with various modern shops.
Now, the park has become a tourist attraction. On weekends or holidays, many locals and even visitors from other places like to gather here to relax and sightsee.
Shuangqing Bay Park
Shuangqing Bay Park is situated in the central area of Fuyang’s South New District and occupies an area of about one thousand mu.
In the center of the park, there is an artificial lake.
HereBack then, it used to be farmland and villages.
Around 2018, the local government decided to develop the South New District, so the parky started to be built as a supporting facility ofbuilding a park as an addition to the new district.
Original is definitely wrong grammar.
Maybe you can also say (if i will use your vocabulary):
"Around 2018, the local government decided to develop the South New District, so they started to build a park as a [ supporting facility or additional facility or auxiliary facility ] for new district." - but it still doesn't sound right.
As a result, the farmlands were converted into construction land, and villagers were relocated to other places.
Passable.
Now, around the park, there are many residential and office buildings.
Fuyang Museum, Fuyang Science and Technology Museum, Fuyang Grand Theater, and Fuyang Library are located at the four corners of the park.
The artificial lake covers an area of about 360 mu.
Inside it, there are various water -aquatic plants, and around it, there are many different trees, flowers, and bushes.
"aquatic" better word, scientific term.
Entertainment activities in the park include light and water shows and night cruises.
To the west of the park, there is a water street, which is a commercial street lined with various modern shops.
Maybe you can use "canal" for water street
NowToday, the park has become a tourist attraction.
On weekends or holidays, many locals and even visitors from other places like to gather here to relax and sightsee.
May 5, 2025
Thank you very much.
Shuangqing Bay Park
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In the center of the park, there is an artificial lake.
HThere, it used to be farmland and villages here.
Around 2018, the local government decided to develop the South New District, so the park started to be built as a supporting facility ofor the new district.
As a result, farmlands wereas converted to construction land, and villagers were relocated to other places.
farmland here is uncountable.
Now, around the park, there are many residential and office buildings around the park.
Fuyang Museum, Fuyang Science and Technology Museum, Fuyang Grand Theater, and Fuyang Library are located at the four corners of the park.
The artificial lake covers an area of about 360 mu24 hectares.
Inside it, there are varioust has numerous types of water - plants , and around it, there are many different trees, flowers, and bushes.
Entertainment activities in the park include light and water shows and night cruises.
To the west of the park, there is a wWater sStreet, which is a commercial street lined with various modern shops.
Sounds like 'Water Street' is a name so no 'a' and has capital letters.
Now, the park has become a tourist attraction.
On weekends or holidays, many locals and even visitors from other placetourists like to gather here to relax and sightsee.
Or 'On weekends or holidays, many locals and visitors like to gather here to relax and sightsee.'
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May 5, 2025
Thank you very much.
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Inside it, there are various water - plants, and around it, there are many different trees, flowers, and bushes. I Inside it, there are various "aquatic" better word, scientific term. |
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To the west of the park, there is a water street, which is a commercial street lined with various modern shops. To the west of the park, there is Sounds like 'Water Street' is a name so no 'a' and has capital letters. To the west of the park, there is a water street, which is a commercial street lined with various modern shops. Maybe you can use "canal" for water street |
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On weekends or holidays, many locals and even visitors from other places like to gather here to relax and sightsee. On weekends or holidays, many locals and Or 'On weekends or holidays, many locals and visitors like to gather here to relax and sightsee.' This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Here, it used to be farmland and villages.
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Around 2018, the local government decided to develop the South New District, so the park started to be built as a supporting facility of the new district. Around 2018, the local government decided to develop the South New District, so the park started to be built as a supporting facility Around 2018, the local government decided to develop the South New District, so the Original is definitely wrong grammar. Maybe you can also say (if i will use your vocabulary): "Around 2018, the local government decided to develop the South New District, so they started to build a park as a [ supporting facility or additional facility or auxiliary facility ] for new district." - but it still doesn't sound right. |
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Fuyang Museum, Fuyang Science and Technology Museum, Fuyang Grand Theater, and Fuyang Library are located at the four corners of the park. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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