Shows i lI Like

I like comedy shows nothing better than itsince it helps me when youI want to get through a bad day.

Shows iI like

I like comedy shows because nothing is better than itwatching one when you want to get through a bad day.

Shows iI like

“I” needs to be capitalized.

I like comedy shows, there is nothing better than itcomedy shows when you want to get through a bad day.

You are combining 3 or 4 clauses into one sentence without a break, so it is a bit confusing to read. Most of the time you can use [subject-verb-object] as guide to know when you have a full clause. In your journal, I added a comma after “I like comedy shows,” to separate the two ideas for clarity:

Idea 1: I like comedy shows.
Idea 2: There’s nothing better than comedy shows when you want to get through a bad day.

I also change “it” to comedy show because I was a little confused what “it” was.

Shows i lI Like

I like comedy shows; nothing better than itone when you want to get through a bad day.

"one" is used instead of "it" here because you're talking about selecting an unknown comedy show from all comedy shows, rather than a specific comedy show.

I put in the semicolon as your two clauses aren't really connected, you could also make it two sentences, as the other commenter suggested.

I like comedy shows. (There is) nothing better than it when you want to get through a bad (/tough) day.