Oct. 10, 2025
Should we eat less rice ?
Today, I listened to a podcast about rice. Rice is a staple in many countries, especially in South Asia and North-South Asia. Roughly 56% of the population eat rice as a staple. Si, approximatively 4 billions people eat rice every week. But, rice s very thirsty. For 1 Kg of rice, we consumed between 3 and 5 thousand litters. It's a huge number! So, people created an association fighting against the high consume of water called the AWC (Alternate Wet Drying). It aims to consume less water because normally, it needs 25 cycles for farmers to flood their crops. But, with their invention which detect the level of water, it needs only 20 cycles. Thanks for reading !
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Thanks for reading !
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Great job. I am not a big fan of rice, because all I want is bread, bread, bread :)
Oct. 11, 2025
Thanks a lot for your correction !
I am not a big fan of rice neither but I have a lot of friends who love it. Have a nice day !
Should we eat less rice ?
Today, I listened to a podcast about rice.
Rice is a staple in many countries, especially in South Asia and North-South Asia.
North-South Asia or North Asia?
Roughly 56% of the population eat rice as a staple.
Si, aApproximatively 4 billions people eat rice every week.
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But, rice s very thirstyloves water.
For 1 Kkg of rice, we consumed between 3 and 5 thousand lit000-5000 litres of waters.
It's a huge number!
So, people created an association fighting against the high consumeption of water called the AWC (Alternate Wet Drying).
It aims to consume less water because normally, it needs 25 cycles for farmers to flood their crops.
25 cycles? I don't get it.
But, with their invention which detect the level of water, it needs only 20 cycles.
Thanks for reading !
Feedback
As I was correcting your journal, I was eating rice 😅.
Rice is easy to prepare, and there are various types of rice, such as coconut rice, fried rice, and jollof rice.
Oct. 11, 2025
When I wrote "si", it was a mistake, I wanted to write "so". And "25 cycles" is the number of cycle requires to flood the rice but I don't remember exactly what were the cycles.
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