People will recognize us as a mansomeone who can handle a life by herself/himself. Also, it gives us a personality that we had never had it before or a role to play in society that can remove depression.

"a role to play in society that can remove depression" means more that society can remove depression. Do you mean that the role you play could be one helping to remove depression? If so, I would reword it to say "... or a role to play in removing depression from society" or "... or a role to play in reducing depression in society".

Staying with parents means putting limitations on children.

Teenagers might not have the opportunity to achieve their own goals during their lifetime because of parents.

In fact, theyparents are always worrying about the future of their children and it makes everything harder and more challenging.

Using "they" here refers to teenagers since that was the subject of the previous sentence. I think you meant parents are the ones worrying.

In that circumstanceskind of situation, it willis not be easy to think and decideor make decisions rationally.

Using "decide" here is not wrong, but "make decisions" is more natural sounding. "Decide" is often used when there is a specific problem or situation that needs a decision. Here, you're talking about problems and situations vaguely so "make decisions" works better.

("Make a decision" is also used in spoken language when someone has been taking too long to decide or when the decision is urgent. For example, "The waiter has been waiting for your order for two hours already. You need to make a decision on what you want to eat!" or "The train is about to depart. You need to make a decision on if you want to go!")

BesidesOn the other hand, living with parents can save time.

This is meant to be the transition to the other side of the argument, right? You talked about the pros of living independently and now you're switching to talk about the pros of living with parents.

"Besides" doesn't make that transition from one side of the argument to the other. "Besides" is more like "also" - it adds another reason to the side of the argument you're already making. So, for example, you could use it like this: "I don't need to work on my homework right now because I'm almost done. Besides, I don't want to."

"On the other hand" is a really good one for making that transition. "However" works, but is better for when just a single sentence shows the other side of the argument, not multiple like you have here. "While..." would also be good, but is a lot more advanced and harder to use. You could say something like, "While there are challenges to it, though, living with parents can save time."

hHaving an independent life would beseems like a great idea at first look, but when we seeconsider it wisely, there are a lot of questions that we can ask.

MThe most common problem is “having an independent life”.

Experts say staying at home and living with parents wouldcan be a cause of depression and sadness in teenagers and teens.

"teenagers" and "teens" mean the same thing. "depression" and "sadness" also mean the same thing.

It has been an issue sincefor a long time.

"since" is used for a specific event or time. Example: "I have lived in Ireland since 1982."

May be even cavemen had this problem.

"maybe" is one word.

It does not seem unreasonable if weto imagine athat in the middle of arguing about having independent life, an angry caveman threw a stone at somewhere andthing, suddenly sparks came out of the stone, and for this reason the fire was discovered.

At bBelow, we will observe more about this topic.

Living by yourself could have benefits and it would be a wonderful experience in the life.

Someone who has independence in the life would be more aware about dangers, threats and risks in the real world and for sure would have self-consciousness.

It means, that having independent life will give us a target in livfe and we are not “Our parents’ child” anymore.

People will recognize us as a manpeople who can handle a life by herself/himself.so i It gives us a personality that we had never had it before or a role to play in society that can remove depression.

In fact, they are always worrying about the future of children and it makes everything harder and more challenging.

There are two ways you can write this: "They always worry" or "They are always worrying". Both are correct.

In thatose circumstances, it will not be easy to think and decide rationally.

We do not have to spend time for cooking food, washing clothes, doing some shopping , etc.

A teenager still does not have enough experiences and knowledges.

Perhaps, some teenagers are not prepared to be alone and they still need someone to take care of them.

hHaving an independent life would be a great idea at first look, but when we see it wisely, there are a lot of questions that we can ask.

hHaving an independent life is just a colorful image that we imagine in our mind.

Living by yourself could have benefits and it wcould be a wonderful experience in the life.

Living separately would be a great challenge for a teenager to taste real life.

In addition, it gives them realistic vision about society and the universe.