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Should students use smartphones in class
think students using smartphones in class is good. First, when they research something it is useful. Second, they can use the latest smartphone information. For these reasons, I think using a smartphone in class is a good idea.
Should students use smartphones in class?
I think students using smartphones in class is good.
First, when they research something, it is useful. (needs a comma)¶
First, it is useful when they research something. (doesn't need a comma)
Two ways to say the same thing.
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Because this is a short text, you don't need to list the reasons "first" and "second." You could even put both reasons in one sentence:
"When they research something, it is useful; and they can use the latest smartphone information."
To make your sentence more specific, you could say "they can access the latest smartphone information"
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Should students use smartphones in class Should students use smartphones in class? |
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think students using smartphones in class is good. I think students using smartphones in class is good. |
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First, when they research something it is useful. First, when they research something, it is useful. (needs a comma)¶ Two ways to say the same thing. |
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Second, they can use the latest smartphone information. |
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For these reasons, I think using a smartphone in class is a good idea. |
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