Feb. 23, 2024
Should robot replace the human teacher?
In my opinion ,robot shouldn’t replace the human teacher. Because I think teachers should not only teach students knowledge, but also teach students how to be a good people. Mechanical teacher won’t do that. Also, mechanical teacher don’t have emotions, students will not feel comfortable in their class. So if students have mechanical teacher, they might receive mechanized education. Their talent will be buried. That’s why I don’t want the robot replaced the human teacher.
Should robots replace the human teachers?
In my opinion ,robots shouldn’t replace the human teachers.
Because I think teachers should not only teach students knowledge, but also teach students how to be a good peoplerson.
MA mechanical teacher won’t do that.
Also, mechanical teacher dwon’'t have emotions, students will not feel comfortable in their class.
So if students have mechanical teacher, they might receive mechanized education.
Their talent will be buried.
That’s why I don’t want the robots to replaced the human teachers.
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Nice write-up, I also agree with all your points.
Should robots replace the human teacher?
In my opinion , robots shouldn’t replace the human teacher.
Because I think teachers should not only teach students knowledge, but also teach students how to be a good people.
Mechanical teachers won’t do that.
Also, mechanical teachers don’t have emotions, so students will not feel comfortable in their class.
So iIf students have a mechanical teacher, they might receive a mechanized education.
That’s why I don’t want the robots to replaced the human teacher.
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Nice job! I agree, it’s tricky to use robots and AI to replace humans!
Should robots replace the human teachers?
You could also write "should robots replace the human teacher?"
In my opinion , robots shouldn’t replace the human teacher.
Commas come after a noun
Because I think teachers should not only teach students knowledge, but also teach students how to be a good people.
Putting "because" here sounds a little unnecessary
A Mechanical teacher won’can't do that.
"Can't" is better, because the point you're trying to make is that the robot is unable to do that
Also, mechanical teachers don’t have emotions, so students will not feel comfortable in their class.
"So" indicated causativity
So if students have a mechanical teacher, they might receive mechanized education.
That’s why I don’t want the robot to replaced the human teacher.
"Replaced" is past tense
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Very good writing here, i understood everything just fine :)
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So if students have mechanical teacher, they might receive mechanized education. So if students have a mechanical teacher, they might receive mechanized education.
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Their talent will be buried. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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