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Should people stop using goods that are made from animalanimal products?

The title could be made more straightforward by simply referring to them as animal products.

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I believe that people should stop using goods that are made from animalanimal products.

This opinion is based on the following reasons: the animal rights and the existence of endangered species.

First, thely, animal rights should be protected.

For example, some companies which make goods that are made from animals often genocideanimal products often kill animals, which is not allowed by the moral.morally acceptable

The word "genocide" isn't used when referring to animals. "morally acceptable" is a much more natural wording. Also, the word 'slaughter' could also be used in place of 'kill' here.

Secondly, If we stop the manufacture goods that are made from animalof animal products, we can protect the endangered animalspecies.

'species' refers to a specific group of animals so it's more appropriate wording

Some of the goodanimal products are made from endangered animalspecies which we should protect.

We can also can create threate regulations for protecting the animals internationally.

In conclusion, I think that stop usping goods that are made from animalthe use of animal products is essential, as this can not only protect the animal rights but also guard theprotect endangered species.