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15mei15

May 17, 2025

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Should online classes be held more or not?

From the spring of 2020, many students suddenly started to take classes by online. At that time, we were just focusing to get used this situation and didn't consider the pros and cons of that. So, today's topic is the meaning of online classes. In my opinion, learning by online has great importance for our experiences and education.
Firstly, we don't need to go school by having it. The student who live in USA might be able to take a class of the profeesor who live in Nigeria. This is wonderful things. Also, before one minute of starting class, we can do any other tasks and this situation should be so effective.
Moreover,online classes enable students to save thier money. In many cases, students should pay a lot of money for study circumstances if we have real classroom and that is a big burden for them. If schools offer the online classes by cutting the extra cost which is for scool buildings, there will be more new students who can learn inovative things from all over the world. And this situation might be generate the next steve jobs in our society.
When it comes to technical and psycological reason, online classes have vital merits too. Since, we can look blackboard closely by our laptop and don't have to care of other students. The private situation makes us possible to consider the contents of class deeply.
From these thoughts, I recognize that online class gives us a chance to study by low cost and with diversity, and it has profond meanings.


I made it by 30 minutes :(
Making logical and smart sentences is super severe.

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FromBeginning in the spring of 2020, many students suddenly started to take classes by online.

At that time, we were just trying focusing on to getting used to this situation and didn't consider the pros and cons of thait.

So, today's topic is the meaningvalue of online classes.

In my opinion, learning by online has great importance for our experiences and education.

Firstly, we don't need to go school by having itsince we have online classes.

TheA student who live in the USA might be able to take a class of thefrom a profeessor who live in Nigeria.

"The" is used when referring to a specific individual or thing but "a" is used when referring to someone or something in general

This is a wonderful things.

It is singular, not plural

Also, beforeuntil one minute ofbefore starting class, we can do any other tasks, and this situation should be so effective.is very helpful (or useful)

Moreover ,online classes enable students to save thier money.

The use of the word "their" here is unnecessary because it is obvious from context whose money you are talking about.

In many cases, students should pay a lot of money for study circumstances if we haveclasses offered in a real classroom and that iscan be a big burden for them. (or you could say...students pay a lot of money for classes offered face to face...

If schools offer the online classes by, thus cutting the extra cost which is needed for school buildings, there will be more new students who can learn inovative things from all over the world.

And this situation might be generate the next sSteve jJobs in our society.

Generate is okay, but "produce" sounds more natural, at least in American english

When it comes to technical and psychological reasons, online classes have vital merits too.

Typically the word "merits" isn't used with an adjective. It isn't technically wrong, but it sounds a bit unusual

Since, wWe can look at the blackboard closely byusing our laptop and don't have to care ofworry about other students.

Including the word "Since" at the beginning would make this a dependent clause, not a sentence on its own.

Theis private situationcy makes usit possible to consider the contents of the class deepcarefully.

From these thoughts, I recognize that online classes gives us a chance to study byfor low cost and with diversity, and it has profound meaningsly useful.

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Well done. You chose a topic that has great depth and are expressing yourself well. The errors that you made are small and will disappear with time.

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15mei15

May 18, 2025

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Thank you so much! I will try hard.

From the spring of 2020, many students suddenly started to take online classes by online.

At that time, we were just focusing ton getting used to this situation and didn't consider the pros and cons of thait.

In my opinion, learning by online has great importance forin our experiences and education.

Firstly, we don't need to go school by having it/ taking them.

TheA student who lives in USA might be able to take a class of thea profeessor who lives in Nigeria.

This is a wonderful things.

Also, before one minute of starting a class, we can do any other tasks and this situation shouldcan be so effective.

Moreover, online classes enable students to save thieir money.

In many cases, students shouldhave to pay a lot of money for study circumstances if we haveing, if they have to go to real classrooms and that is a big/huge burden for them.

If schools offer the online classes by cutting the extra costs, which is used for school buildings, there will be more new students who can/ are able to learn innovative things from all over the world.

And this situation might (be able to) generate the next sSteve jJobs in our society.

Names are always capitalized.

When it comes to technical and psychological reasons, online classes have vital merits too.

Since, we can look at a blackboard closely by ouon their laptop and don't have to care ofabout other students.

The private situationfact that its private makes usit possible for us to consider the contents of a class deeply.

From these thoughts, I recognize/ came to the conclusion that online classes gives us a chance to study byat a low cost and with diversity, and it has profound meanings.

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Great work!

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15mei15

May 17, 2025

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Thsnk you so much.

Should online classes be held more or not?


From the spring of 2020, many students suddenly started to take classes by online.


From the spring of 2020, many students suddenly started to take online classes by online.

FromBeginning in the spring of 2020, many students suddenly started to take classes by online.

At that time, we were just focusing to get used this situation and didn't consider the pros and cons of that.


At that time, we were just focusing ton getting used to this situation and didn't consider the pros and cons of thait.

At that time, we were just trying focusing on to getting used to this situation and didn't consider the pros and cons of thait.

So, today's topic is the meaning of online classes.


So, today's topic is the meaningvalue of online classes.

Firstly, we don't need to go school by having it.


Firstly, we don't need to go school by having it/ taking them.

Firstly, we don't need to go school by having itsince we have online classes.

In my opinion, learning by online has great importance for our experiences and education.


In my opinion, learning by online has great importance forin our experiences and education.

In my opinion, learning by online has great importance for our experiences and education.

The student who live in USA might be able to take a class of the profeesor who live in Nigeria.


TheA student who lives in USA might be able to take a class of thea profeessor who lives in Nigeria.

TheA student who live in the USA might be able to take a class of thefrom a profeessor who live in Nigeria.

"The" is used when referring to a specific individual or thing but "a" is used when referring to someone or something in general

This is wonderful things.


This is a wonderful things.

This is a wonderful things.

It is singular, not plural

Also, before one minute of starting class, we can do any other tasks and this situation should be so effective.


Also, before one minute of starting a class, we can do any other tasks and this situation shouldcan be so effective.

Also, beforeuntil one minute ofbefore starting class, we can do any other tasks, and this situation should be so effective.is very helpful (or useful)

Moreover,online classes enable students to save thier money.


Moreover, online classes enable students to save thieir money.

Moreover ,online classes enable students to save thier money.

The use of the word "their" here is unnecessary because it is obvious from context whose money you are talking about.

And this situation might be generate the next steve jobs in our society.


And this situation might (be able to) generate the next sSteve jJobs in our society.

Names are always capitalized.

And this situation might be generate the next sSteve jJobs in our society.

Generate is okay, but "produce" sounds more natural, at least in American english

In many cases, students should pay a lot of money for study circumstances if we have real classroom and that is a big burden for them.


In many cases, students shouldhave to pay a lot of money for study circumstances if we haveing, if they have to go to real classrooms and that is a big/huge burden for them.

In many cases, students should pay a lot of money for study circumstances if we haveclasses offered in a real classroom and that iscan be a big burden for them. (or you could say...students pay a lot of money for classes offered face to face...

If schools offer the online classes by cutting the extra cost which is for scool buildings, there will be more new students who can learn inovative things from all over the world.


If schools offer the online classes by cutting the extra costs, which is used for school buildings, there will be more new students who can/ are able to learn innovative things from all over the world.

If schools offer the online classes by, thus cutting the extra cost which is needed for school buildings, there will be more new students who can learn inovative things from all over the world.

When it comes to technical and psycological reason, online classes have vital merits too.


When it comes to technical and psychological reasons, online classes have vital merits too.

When it comes to technical and psychological reasons, online classes have vital merits too.

Typically the word "merits" isn't used with an adjective. It isn't technically wrong, but it sounds a bit unusual

Since, we can look blackboard closely by our laptop and don't have to care of other students.


Since, we can look at a blackboard closely by ouon their laptop and don't have to care ofabout other students.

Since, wWe can look at the blackboard closely byusing our laptop and don't have to care ofworry about other students.

Including the word "Since" at the beginning would make this a dependent clause, not a sentence on its own.

The private situation makes us possible to consider the contents of class deeply.


The private situationfact that its private makes usit possible for us to consider the contents of a class deeply.

Theis private situationcy makes usit possible to consider the contents of the class deepcarefully.

From these thoughts, I recognize that online class gives us a chance to study by low cost and with diversity, and it has profond meanings.


From these thoughts, I recognize/ came to the conclusion that online classes gives us a chance to study byat a low cost and with diversity, and it has profound meanings.

From these thoughts, I recognize that online classes gives us a chance to study byfor low cost and with diversity, and it has profound meaningsly useful.

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