March 21, 2023
Should junk food and processed food be banned?
As fast food consumption grows and becomes more integrated into our daily meals, the need of a strong healthy message from institutions has never been greater. There are currently over a billion obese people in the world according to the World Obesity Federation last report. In fact, the highest growth rates are among children and adolescents.
This alarming trend may be attributed in part to the widespread of cheap and high sugar, salt and fat options that lack nutritional values. The excessive consumption of these foods can cause health consequences that can increase your risk of developing heart disease, diabete and other chronic illnesses.
Given the impact of junk food on public health, i think it is key that institutions take some proactive actions to promote healthy habits. These can include initiatives such as nutritional education programs in school or public health campaigns that emphasises the benefits of a balanced diet and a non sedentary lifestyle.
Moreover, people also have an important role to play in reducing their consumption of fast food and choosing healthier choices. Therefore, both individuals and institutions must work together to promote a healthy food culture that priories long-term health than short-term pleasure.
Concerning if processed food should be banned, I don't think so. It is an excessive measure; I find it difficult to accomplish that without having negative consequences in the food industry and the countries' economy. However, I agree that junk food advertising to children should be restricted, as they are the most vulnerable collective.
As fast food consumption grows and becomes more integrated into our daily meals, the need ofor a strong healthy message from institutions has never been greater.
There are currently over a billion obese people in the world, according to the World Obesity Federation's latest report.
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Well-written and well-argued piece!
March 21, 2023
Thank you!
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Should junk food and processed food be banned? |
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As fast food consumption grows and becomes more integrated into our daily meals, the need of a strong healthy message from institutions has never been greater. As fast food consumption grows and becomes more integrated into our daily meals, the need |
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There are currently over a billion obese people in the world according to the World Obesity Federation last report. There are currently over a billion obese people in the world, according to the World Obesity Federation's latest report. |
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In fact, the highest growth rates are among children and adolescents. |
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This alarming trend may be attributed in part to the widespread of cheap and high sugar, salt and fat options that lack nutritional values. This alarming trend may be attributed in part to the widespread Tweaked it a little bit to make it clear you're talking about food that has high sugar, salt and fat content. |
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The excessive consumption of these foods can cause health consequences that can increase your risk of developing heart disease, diabete and other chronic illnesses. The excessive consumption of these foods can "To cause...a consequence" doesn't sound quite right, so I'd rather use "give rise to" or "leads to". |
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Given the impact of junk food on public health, i think it is key that institutions take some proactive actions to promote healthy habits. Given the impact of junk food on public health, |
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These can include initiatives such as nutritional education programs in school or public health campaigns that emphasises the benefits of a balanced diet and a non sedentary lifestyle. Th |
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Moreover, people also have an important role to play in reducing their consumption of fast food and choosing healthier choices. Moreover, people also have an important role to play in reducing their consumption of fast food and choosing healthier "Choosing a choice" also reads a bit unnaturally, so I've provided an alternative. |
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Therefore, both individuals and institutions must work together to promote a healthy food culture that priories long-term health than short-term pleasure. Therefore, both individuals and institutions must work together to promote a healthy food culture that prioritises long-term health rather than short-term pleasure. |
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Concerning if processed food should be banned, I don't think so. Concerning |
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It is an excessive measure; I find it difficult to accomplish that without having negative consequences in the food industry and the countries' economy. It is an excessive measure; I |
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However, I agree that junk food advertising to children should be restricted, as they are the most vulnerable collective. However, I agree that junk food advertising to children should be restricted, as they are the most vulnerable c |
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