Dec. 6, 2020
Should Adult Children Live with Their Parents?
It is quite normal for adult children to live with their parents until they get married in China. However, this behaviour has triggered some discussions. People who applaud for this action contribute this outcome to the ridiculous housing price in recent years, to children’s purchase of a car and their irrational shopping on up-to-date electronic devices. Moreover, the essence of family is to support one another, so it is reasonable for parents to lift their children up when they still cannot stand on their own two feet.
But some objectors claim this can only indulge children and render them no pressure. What is the more sensible is to ask them save their own money during university, and then, after graduation, they entail to move out and live on their own. Only do that can their children be independent and confident.
And people who hold neutral opinion convey, children can live with their parents with paying the care and money.
As far as I’m concerned, living with parents is an selective option for children, and it is a beneficial thing, to an extent, to parents as well as children.
On the one hand, in view of the soaring rate on renting and purchasing housing, it is impossible for the graduate to move out instantly after they leave the university. Then setting a deadline is a great motivation and comfort to children. Because in that way provide children with much more time to enrich their career experience and their pocket.
On the other hand, in some families, especially those in Asia countries, parents are reluctant to ask their children to live by themselves even when they are financially independent. Not only because they are sort of coddling their children, but they enjoy the company. And that is acceptable, but what’s needed to pay attention to is the children should take care of their parents but not take advantage of them.
Nevertheless, if there is some serious handicap, living with parents could be a better choice for the child.
To sum up, whether the child choose to live with their parents or not is reasonable. However, they should always manage their own life successfully in the financial part. Because parents can help them for several times, but not for their whole life.
Should Adult Children Live with Their Parents?
It is quite normal for adult children to live with their parents until they get married in China.
However, this behaviour has triggered some discussions.
People who applaud for this action conattribute this outcome to the ridiculous housing price in recent years, to children’s purchase of a car and their irrational shopping on up-to-date electronic devices.
What do you mean by "applaud for this action"? You should especially specify what you mean by "this action". Otherwise, the grammar is correct!
Moreover, the essence of family is to support one another, so it is reasonable for parents to lift their children up when they still cannot stand on their own two feet.
But some objectors claim this can only indulgeallow children and render themto indulge because they live with no pressure.
What is the more sensible is to ask them to save their own money during university, and then, after graduation, they entailseek to move out and live on their own.
Only do thatthen can their children be independent and confident.
And people who hold a neutral opinion convey,express that children can live with their parents withhile paying the care and moneyfor some costs.
As far as I’m concerned, living with parents is an selective option for children, and it is a beneficial thing, to an extent, to parents as well as children.
What do you mean by "selective"? The sentence sounds correct, but the word choice for that one word is confusing.
On the one hand, in view of the soaring rate on renting and purchasing housing, it is impossible for the graduate to move out instantly after they leave the university.
Then sSetting a deadline is a great motivation and comfort to children.
Because in that wayThis way, parents provide children with much more time to enrich their career experience and their pockwallet.
On the other hand, in some families, especially those in Asian countries, parents are reluctant to ask their children to live by themselves even when they are financially independent.
Not only because they are sort of coddling their children, but they enjoy the company.
And that is acceptable, but what’s needed to pay attention to is the children should take care of their parents but not take advantage of them.
Nevertheless, if there is some serious handicap, living with parents could be a better choice for the child.
To sum up, whether the child chooses to live with their parents or not is reasonable.
However, they should always manage their own financial life successfully in the financial part.
Because pParents can help them for severala times, but not for their whole life.
Dec. 15, 2020
As far as I’m concerned, living with parents is an selective option for children, and it is a beneficial thing, to an extent, to parents as well as children.
Maybe just saying “an option” is better?
Dec. 15, 2020
Thank you!
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Should Adult Children Live with Their Parents? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is quite normal for adult children to live with their parents until they get married in China. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, this behaviour has triggered some discussions. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People who applaud for this action contribute this outcome to the ridiculous housing price in recent years, to children’s purchase of a car and their irrational shopping on up-to-date electronic devices. People who applaud for this action What do you mean by "applaud for this action"? You should especially specify what you mean by "this action". Otherwise, the grammar is correct! |
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Moreover, the essence of family is to support one another, so it is reasonable for parents to lift their children up when they still cannot stand on their own two feet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But some objectors claim this can only indulge children and render them no pressure. But some objectors claim this can only |
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What is the more sensible is to ask them save their own money during university, and then, after graduation, they entail to move out and live on their own. What is |
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Only do that can their children be independent and confident. Only |
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And people who hold neutral opinion convey, children can live with their parents with paying the care and money. And people who hold a neutral opinion |
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As far as I’m concerned, living with parents is an selective option for children, and it is a beneficial thing, to an extent, to parents as well as children. As far as I’m concerned, living with parents is a What do you mean by "selective"? The sentence sounds correct, but the word choice for that one word is confusing. |
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On the one hand, in view of the soaring rate on renting and purchasing housing, it is impossible for the graduate to move out instantly after they leave the university. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then setting a deadline is a great motivation and comfort to children.
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Because in that way provide children with much more time to enrich their career experience and their pocket.
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On the other hand, in some families, especially those in Asia countries, parents are reluctant to ask their children to live by themselves even when they are financially independent. On the other hand, in some families, especially those in Asian countries, parents are reluctant to ask their children to live by themselves even when they are financially independent. |
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Not only because they are sort of coddling their children, but they enjoy the company. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And that is acceptable, but what’s needed to pay attention to is the children should take care of their parents but not take advantage of them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nevertheless, if there is some serious handicap, living with parents could be a better choice for the child. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To sum up, whether the child choose to live with their parents or not is reasonable. To sum up, whether the child chooses to live with their parents or not is reasonable. |
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However, they should always manage their own life successfully in the financial part. However, they should always manage their own financial life successfully |
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Because parents can help them for several times, but not for their whole life.
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