Aug. 26, 2020
short writing about the cultural diffusion
We can saw the cultural diffusion thought the buildings. As I observe, these have many Victorian-style single houses which have varied colors, at Oakland. The most Victorian-style houses were built more than100 years. Thought the houses, we could see the cultural diffusion from early British immigrants. Additionally, one of the oldest Chinatown locates in San Francisco. If you roan on the street in Chinatown, you feel cultural diffusion from 20th century HongKong. Very old style and unpleasant, in my opinion.
short writing about the cultural diffusion
We can saw thee cultural diffusion throughout the buildings.
As I observe, these havThere are many Victorian-style single houses which have varied colors, at in Oakland.
The mMost Victorian-style houses were built more than 100 years ago.
Throughout the houses, we couldan see the cultural diffusion from early British immigrants.
I changed “could” to “can” here since the rest of the paragraph is written in present tense.
Additionally, one of the oldest Chinatowns is locatesd in San Francisco.
If you roanm on the street in Chinatown, you feel cultural diffusion from 20th century HongKong.
Very old style and unpleasant, in my opinion.
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Good job! I liked your observations about the architecture styles.
short writing about the cultural diffusion
We can saw thee cultural diffusion throught the appearance of buildings.
As II have observe,d that thesre have manyare, Victorian-style single houses which haveof varied colors, at in Oakland.
The most Victorian-style houses were built more than 100 years.
Throught the houses, we couldan see the cultural diffusion from early British immigrants.
Additionally, one of the oldest Chinatown’s is locatesd in San Francisco.
If you roan onm the streets in Chinatown, you feel cultural diffusion from 20th century Hong Kong.
VIt’s a very old style and unpleasant, in my opinion.
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Good job, well done!
short writing about the cultural diffusion
We can saw thee cultural diffusion throught the buildings.¶
You can also say:
We can see cultural diffusion through Architecture.
("Architecture" includes all types of buildings and outdoor structures like bridges, archways, skyscrapers, houses, etc.)
As II have observe,d theseat Oakland haves many Victorian-style single houses which have varied colors, at Oakland.
The mMost Victorian-style houses were built more than 100 years ago.
Throught the houses, we could see than see cultural diffusion from early British immigrants.
Additionally, there is one of the oldest Chinatown locateions in San Francisco.
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Or:
There is also one of the oldest Chinatown locations in San Francisco.
If you roan onm the street ins of Chinatown, you feel cultural diffusion from 20th century Hong Kong.
Or:
If you walk on the street in Chinatown, you feel cultural diffusion from 20th century Hong Kong.
Very old style-fashioned and unpleasant, in my opinion.
More proper for writing would be:
It is very old-fashioned and unpleasant, in my opinion.
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Great job, this is a complicated topic!
Aug. 26, 2020
thank you
it is a new topic to talk about the architecture area.
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We can saw the cultural diffusion thought the buildings. We can s You can also say: We can see cultural diffusion through Architecture. ("Architecture" includes all types of buildings and outdoor structures like bridges, archways, skyscrapers, houses, etc.) We can s We can s |
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As I observe, these have many Victorian-style single houses which have varied colors, at Oakland.
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The most Victorian-style houses were built more than100 years.
The most Victorian-style houses were built more than 100 years.
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Thought the houses, we could see the cultural diffusion from early British immigrants. Through Through Throughout the houses, we c I changed “could” to “can” here since the rest of the paragraph is written in present tense. |
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Additionally, one of the oldest Chinatown locates in San Francisco. Additionally, there is one of the oldest Chinatown locat Or: There is also one of the oldest Chinatown locations in San Francisco. Additionally, one of the oldest Chinatown’s is locate Additionally, one of the oldest Chinatowns is locate |
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If you roan on the street in Chinatown, you feel cultural diffusion from 20th century HongKong. If you roa Or: If you walk on the street in Chinatown, you feel cultural diffusion from 20th century Hong Kong. If you roa If you roa |
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Very old style and unpleasant, in my opinion. Very old More proper for writing would be: It is very old-fashioned and unpleasant, in my opinion.
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