July 14, 2025
In my opinion, there's two type of reality shows:
1. Reality shows, where people act like real, average people.
2. Reality shows, where people act like crazy idiots from Mars, who never lived on Earth.
I have enough experience with average human behavior, so I don't need the first one. The 2nd one is too much for me so if I don't want to screem after 2 minutes, I have to avoid it. I think, these shows are really harmful to people. Since these things have been on TV, people started to act like people in the TV. And reality shows have become even crazier because they have to shoot above average, so a vicious circle is formed. People imitate shows, and shows try to outdo people.
I'm pretty sure it leads to a disaster, a catastrophy, an armageddon or the worst combination of these.
Anyway, there could be reality shows that are good but I don't know, so I acknowledge that my words can't be generalized to every reality show.
In my opinion, there's are two types of reality shows:
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if there is more than one thing, use "there are" instead of "there is"
Reality shows, where people act like crazy idiots from Mars, who have never lived on Earth.
I have enough experience with average human behavior, so I don't need to watch the first one.
The 2nd one is too much for me so if I don't want to screeam after 2 minutes, I have to avoid it.
And reality shows have become even crazier because they have to shoot above average, so a vicious circle is being formed.
I'm pretty sure it leads to a disaster, a catastrophye, an armageddon or the worst combination of these.
Anyway, there could be reality shows that are good but I don't know them, so I acknowledge that my words can't be generaapplized to every reality show.
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Well done 👏🏻 Just a few small mistakes, but apart of that, it's very good:)
In my opinion, there's two types of reality shows:
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1.
Just a missing 's' on the word 'types' here.
Reality shows, where people act like real, average people.
Reality shows, where people act like crazy idiots from Mars, who never lived on Earth.
The 2nd one is too much for me, so if I don't want to screeam after 2 minutes, I have to avoid it.
Just a small spelling correction: scream, not screem.
And reality shows have become even crazier because they have to shoot above average, so a vicious cirycle is formed.
The idiom is "a vicious cycle."
Stylistically, I might simplify this sentence a bit:
"And reality shows have become even crazier because they have to shoot above average, so they get into a vicious cycle."
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Excellent English! No major comments, just a small typo, a spelling error, and some stylistic notes. Keep up the great work!
Short answer: I hate them! |
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Reality shows, where people act like real, average people. Reality shows |
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Reality shows, where people act like crazy idiots from Mars, who never lived on Earth. Reality shows Reality shows, where people act like crazy idiots from Mars, who have never lived on Earth. |
I have enough experience with average human behavior, so I don't need the first one. I have enough experience with average human behavior, so I don't need to watch the first one. |
The 2nd one is too much for me so if I don't want to screem after 2 minutes, I have to avoid it. The 2nd one is too much for me, so if I don't want to scre Just a small spelling correction: scream, not screem. The 2nd one is too much for me so if I don't want to scre |
I think, these shows are really harmful to people. |
Since these things have been on TV, people started to act like people in the TV. |
And reality shows have become even crazier because they have to shoot above average, so a vicious circle is formed. And reality shows have become even crazier because they have to shoot above average, so a vicious c The idiom is "a vicious cycle." Stylistically, I might simplify this sentence a bit: "And reality shows have become even crazier because they have to shoot above average, so they get into a vicious cycle." And reality shows have become even crazier because they have to shoot above average, so a vicious circle is being formed. |
People imitate shows, and shows try to outdo people. |
I'm pretty sure it leads to a disaster, a catastrophy, an armageddon or the worst combination of these. I'm pretty sure it leads to a disaster, a catastroph |
Anyway, there could be reality shows that are good but I don't know, so I acknowledge that my words can't be generalized to every reality show. Anyway, there could be reality shows that are good but I don't know them, so I acknowledge that my words can't be |
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