Sept. 19, 2021
Shopping these days
These days, it is more convenient to buy something than past.
When I was young, I used to go discount stores or groceries for buying something.
If I wanted to buy many items or heavy goods, I should drive my car to bring them.
But now, I can buy items online, so I don’t need to go real stores anymore.
All I have to is to pick and choose items on my phone or my computer.
With great payment systems and excellent delivery systems, I can get the items easily and quickly.
Also there are lots of options to choose from, so I can get great deals.
Once again, shopping has become much easier than in the past.
Shopping these days
These days, it is more convenient to buy something than in the past.
When I was young, I used to go to discount stores or groceries forto buying some things.
Using the infinitive at the end feels more natural to me, and I wrote "things" instead because you usually buy multiple things there
If I wanted to buy many items or heavy goods, I shwould drive my car to bring them all back.
Would is the best in this sentence as it describes a past action, should is more appropriate if you were saying "If I want to buy many items or heavy goods, I should drive my car to bring them"
But now, I can buy items online, so I don’t need to go to real stores anymore.
All I have to do is to pick and choose items on my phone or my computer.
With great payment systems and excellent delivery systems, I can get the items easily and quickly.
Also, there are lots of options to choose from, so I can get great deals.
Once again, shopping has become much easier than in the past.
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Sept. 20, 2021
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Shopping these days This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These days, it is more convenient to buy something than past. These days, it is more convenient to buy something than in the past. |
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When I was young, I used to go discount stores or groceries for buying something. When I was young, I used to go to discount stores or groceries Using the infinitive at the end feels more natural to me, and I wrote "things" instead because you usually buy multiple things there |
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If I wanted to buy many items or heavy goods, I should drive my car to bring them. If I wanted to buy many items or heavy goods, I Would is the best in this sentence as it describes a past action, should is more appropriate if you were saying "If I want to buy many items or heavy goods, I should drive my car to bring them" |
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But now, I can buy items online, so I don’t need to go real stores anymore. But now, I can buy items online, so I don’t need to go to real stores anymore. |
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All I have to is to pick and choose items on my phone or my computer. All I have to do is to pick and choose items on my phone or my computer. |
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With great payment systems and excellent delivery systems, I can get the items easily and quickly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also there are lots of options to choose from, so I can get great deals. Also, there are lots of options to choose from, so I can get great deals. |
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Once again, shopping has become much easier than in the past. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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