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In our country, double eleven shopping festival is going on. The e-commerce platforms have ran lots of advertisements to make shopping atmosphere, they give customers lots of artificial desires. Customers bought many products which they don't really need, just because the products were a bit little cheaper than usual. What do you say about this?
In our country, the double eleven shopping festival is going on.
The e-commerce platforms have ran lots of advertisements to makecreate a shopping atmosphere,; they 've given customers lots of artificial desires.
"create" is used much more often with "atmosphere" than "make".
The second clause is a little detached from the first, so a larger gap than a comma makes the writing more natural (for example, a semicolon (;), dash (-) or splitting the sentence in two).
What do you saythink about this?
"What do you think about ..." is more natural when asking for someone's opinion. "What do you have to say about this?" is the once case where you might see say, but the phrase with "say" sounds a little bit like it's demanding an answer or explanation, so better to stick to "think" as the default.
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Helpful comments. Thanks!
In our country, "double eleven" shopping festival is goinghappening right on.
What is double eleven? Is it like black friday in america?
The e-commerce platforms have raonline shops run lots of advertisements to make shopping atmosphere, they give customers lots of artificial desirespeople want to buy things they don't need.
To me this sounds more natural
Customers boughtuy many products which they don't really need, just because the products were a bit little bit cheaper than usual.
What do you saythink about this?
I think people need to think more before buying something. Do I really need this? What will it do for me? Sometimes if I'm not sure I write it down and check in a week. If I still want it I'll get it but if I forgot about it I usually won't get it.
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You used present tense for the start of your writing but then used past tense for the rest which is a bit weird so just make sure to stick to one or the other!
In ourmy country, dthe "Double eEleven" shopping festival is gohappening onow.
Explain what the "Double Eleven" festival is.
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"Double Eleven" is the largest online shopping spree in China, it's held on November 11 every year.
In ourmy country, the "double eleven" shopping festival is going on.
FYI: A lot of people reading here might not be familiar with the concept of sales/shopping festivals related to dates like November 11.
The e-commerce platforms have ran lots of advertisements to make shopping atmosphere, they givepromote an atmosphere conducive to shopping. This has led to customers with lots of artificial desires.
Customers have bought many products whichthat they don't really need, just because the products were a bit little cheaper than usual.
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I think this is just one facet of capitalism in general, not just e-commerce platforms. Companies all want to make money, and sometimes, offering their products and/or services at competitive prices helps them make more money in the long run than if they were less flexible about pricing.
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In-depth analysis, Brilliant!
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