Jan. 2, 2022
shopping center
I go in my favorite shopping center an we have fun.
First we go buy new clothes . After that go we to eat by the chinese. But that is not the best . This Shopping center have her only bus. It is on only end the city and very big. It has all Billa Lidl Libro Saturn Mc Donals . We were of on my birthdays and it was very funny and great . They have Fountain the are big and very tall.
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Remember to start a title with a capital letter (S)
I go into my favorite shopping center and we have fun.
Use "go" + "to".
E.g. "I go to the shop/the restaurant/the library..."
First we go buy new clothes .
After that go wewe go to eat by the cat a Chinese.
Do you mean a Chinese restaurant? Then, use "we go to eat at a Chinese (restaurant)."
But that is not the best .
This Sshopping center have hers only one bus.
It is on only endone end of the city and is very big.
It has all Billa, Lidl, Libro, Saturn and Mc Donalds .
We were off on my birthdays and it was very funny and great .
Is it one birthday? Or lots of birthdays? Watch out for the ending of "birthday". Use "s" if it is plural (2, 3, 4, ... birthdays).
"Funny" means it makes you laugh.
"Fun" means you enjoy it.
Watch out for the different meanings.
They have Fa fountain the arewhich is big and very tall.
Is it one fountain? -> "They have a fountain which is big and very tall."
Or is it lots of fountains? -> "They have fountains which are big and very tall."
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shopping center
Remember to start a title with a capital letter (S) |
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I go in my favorite shopping center an we have fun. I go Use "go" + "to". E.g. "I go to the shop/the restaurant/the library..." |
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First we go buy new clothes . First we go buy new clothes |
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After that go we to eat by the chinese. After that Do you mean a Chinese restaurant? Then, use "we go to eat at a Chinese (restaurant)." |
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But that is not the best . But that is not the best |
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This Shopping center have her only bus. This |
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It is on only end the city and very big. It is on only |
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It has all Billa Lidl Libro Saturn Mc Donals . It has |
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We were of on my birthdays and it was very funny and great . We were off on my birthdays and it was very fun Is it one birthday? Or lots of birthdays? Watch out for the ending of "birthday". Use "s" if it is plural (2, 3, 4, ... birthdays). "Funny" means it makes you laugh. "Fun" means you enjoy it. Watch out for the different meanings. |
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They have Fountain the are big and very tall. They have Is it one fountain? -> "They have a fountain which is big and very tall." Or is it lots of fountains? -> "They have fountains which are big and very tall." |
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