March 29, 2022
Shopping
I say that women can spend all day shopping and come home with just one thing, but if a man needs, for example, a shirt, he will go just to one or two shops and buy one. So,if a man goes shopping with a woman ‘he will suffer'! But is it really true? I know a lot of women who are very fast in shops and some men who can't make decisions at all!
Shopping
I say that women can spend all day shopping and come home with just one thing, but if a man needs, for example, a shirt, he will go just to one or two shops and buy one.
So,if a man goes shopping with a woman ‘he will suffer'!
But is it really true?
I know a lot of women who are very fast in shops and some men who can't make decisions at all!
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Awesome writing!
However, you saying 'I say' at the beginning then following that with 'he will suffer' in quotes, as if it is someone else's idea, and "But is it really true?" makes it seem as if you are confused about what you believe or that you are contradicting yourself. If you replaced "I say" with "People say" then everything would be fine. Again great work !! I hope this comment helps you :^)
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I say that women can spend all day shopping and come home with just one thing, but if a man needs, for example, a shirt, he will go just to one or two shops and buy one. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So,if a man goes shopping with a woman ‘he will suffer'! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But is it really true? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I know a lot of women who are very fast in shops and some men who can't make decisions at all! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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