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In my experience shopping in person is better than online shopping because some times pictures online aren't actual ,so we can't make sure decitions.
In addition , many problems can happen concerning the quality , size and colours.
So it seems that shopping in person avoid us many problems which we can find them in online shopping.

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Shopping

In my experience shopping in person is better than online shopping because some times pictures online aren't actually accurate ,so we can't make sure decitiongood choices.

In addition , many problems can happen concerning the quality , size and colours.

So it seems that shopping in person avoid us manyhelps us avoid these problems which we can find them in online shopping.

In my experience shopping in person is better than online shopping because some times pictures online aren't actual ,curate so we can't make secure decitsions.

In addition , many problems can happen concerning the quality , size and colours.

So it seems that shopping in person allows us to avoid us many problems which we can find them inoccur with online shopping.

In my experience shopping in person is better than online shopping because some times pictures online aren't actureal ,so we can't make sure decitsions.

In addition , many problems can happen concerning the quality , size, and colours.

I think colours is correct in the UK. If you're interested in how English is written in the USA, it's "colors".

So it seems that shopping in person avoid us many problems which we can find them in online shopping. (or you could say "which we can find shopping online."

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In my experience shopping in person is better than online shopping because some times pictures online aren't actual ,so we can't make sure decitions.


In my experience shopping in person is better than online shopping because some times pictures online aren't actureal ,so we can't make sure decitsions.

In my experience shopping in person is better than online shopping because some times pictures online aren't actual ,curate so we can't make secure decitsions.

In my experience shopping in person is better than online shopping because some times pictures online aren't actually accurate ,so we can't make sure decitiongood choices.

In addition , many problems can happen concerning the quality , size and colours.


In addition , many problems can happen concerning the quality , size, and colours.

I think colours is correct in the UK. If you're interested in how English is written in the USA, it's "colors".

In addition , many problems can happen concerning the quality , size and colours.

In addition , many problems can happen concerning the quality , size and colours.

So it seems that shopping in person avoid us many problems which we can find them in online shopping.


So it seems that shopping in person avoid us many problems which we can find them in online shopping. (or you could say "which we can find shopping online."

So it seems that shopping in person allows us to avoid us many problems which we can find them inoccur with online shopping.

So it seems that shopping in person avoid us manyhelps us avoid these problems which we can find them in online shopping.

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