July 4, 2025
shopping
The weather today is very nice, I saw a man in a white shirt walking on the street. He is going to the shop. He wants to buy a subject, and finally he got one.
The weather today is very nice, I saw a man in a white shirt walking odown the street.
on the street is technically fine but no one really says that, it's much more natural to say walking 'down' the street
He iwas going to the shop.
You are recounting something that happened in the past
He wantsed to buy a subject, and finally he got one.
- wants is present tense should be past tense to fit with rest of story
- subject is quite unclear, not sure what that is supposed to be
sShopping
The weather today is very nice,. I saw a man in a white shirt walking on the street.
He iwas going to the shop.
Hbecause he wantsed to buy a subject, and finsomething , and eventually he got oneit.
July 4, 2025
It should look like this '' The weather today is very nice. I saw a man in a white t-shirt walking on the street. He was going to the shop because he wanted to buy something, and eventually he got it.''
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The weather today is very nice, I saw a man in a white shirt walking on the street. The weather today is very nice The weather today is very nice, I saw a man in a white shirt walking on the street is technically fine but no one really says that, it's much more natural to say walking 'down' the street |
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He is going to the shop. He He You are recounting something that happened in the past |
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He wants to buy a subject, and finally he got one.
He want - wants is present tense should be past tense to fit with rest of story - subject is quite unclear, not sure what that is supposed to be |
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