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Dec. 26, 2022

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Shogi (Japanese chess)

According to the news, a shogi player Souta Fujii became the youngest player to win 300 games in total.
Congratulations!
He broke Mr. Habu’s previous record.
Mr. Hanyu is also a shogi player who will go down in the history of shogi, but Mr. Fujii is a talented player who has broken the records of Mr. Hanyu and others one after another.
In addition, he was born in Aichi prefecture as same as me, so I feel familiar with him.
I knew only the basic rules of shogi, but I studied a little under the influence of Mr. Fujii.
I sometimes play shogi with my nephew.
I can still win the games, because my nephew is only 8 years old :)


ニュースによると、将棋の藤井聡太君が最年少で通算300勝をあげたそうです。
おめでとうございます!
これまでの羽生さんの記録を塗り替えました。
羽生さんも将棋の歴史に残る棋士ですが、藤井くんは羽生さん達の記録を次々塗り替えている逸材です。
しかも私と同じ愛知県出身なので、親しみを持って応援しています。
将棋は基本のルールしか知りませんでしたが、藤井くんの影響で少しだけ勉強しました。
甥っ子とたまに対戦しています。
甥っ子はまだ8歳なので、まだ勝てます(笑)

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Shogi (Japanese chess)

According to the news, a shogi player named Souta Fujii became the youngest player to win 300 games in total.

CongratulationsGood for him!

You only really say "congratulations" to the person you're congratulating.

He broke Mr. Habu’s previous record.

Mr. Hanyu is also a shoginother player who will go down in the history of shogi, but Mr. Fujii is a talented player who has broken the records of Mr. Hanyu and others one after another.

In addition, he was born in Aichi prefecture as, same as me, so I feel familiar withclose to him.

I found it hard to come up with a better expression for the last part of your sentence ("...so I feel familiar with him"), so don't take my correction as gospel!

I knew only the basic rules of shogi, but I studied a little under the influencdecided to study a little because of Mr. Fujii.

I'm a little confused by your original sentence. Were you taught by Fujii?

I sometimes play shogi with my nephew.

I can still win the games, because my nephew is only 8 years old :)

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Interesting! Good writing!

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milkyway

Dec. 28, 2022

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I knew only the basic rules of shogi, but I studied a little under the influencdecided to study a little because of Mr. Fujii.

I wanted to say that seeing Mr. Fujii's success made me want to play shogi.
Thank you for your corrections.

Shogi (Japanese cChess)

Chess is important in the title so we capitalize the first letter.

According to the news, a shogi player named Souta Fujii became the youngest player to win 300 games in total.

おめでとうございます!

Congratulations!

He broke Mr. Habu’s previous record.

Mr. Hanyu is also a shogi player who will go down in the history of shogi, but Mr. Fujii is a talented player who has broken the records of Mr. Hanyu and others one after another.

In addition, he was born in Aichi prefecture asthe same as meI was, so I feel familiara kinship with him.

いいですね。

I kneow only the basic rules of shogi, but I studied a little under the influence of Mr. Fujii.

I sometimes play shogi with my nephew.

I can still win the games, because my nephew is only 8 years old. :)

ハハ!

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いい話です。よく出来ました!

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milkyway

Dec. 28, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections.

Shogi (Japanese chess)

According to the news, a shogi player named Souta Fujii became the youngest player to win 300 games in total.

CongratulationsWhat an achievement!

うまく説明できないけど、英語には「Congratulations!」は話し言葉的なので、文書とか記事にはあまり使いません。なぜなら「Congratulations!」を書いたら著者が読者に祝いを述べると聞こえます。

He broke Mr. Habu’s previous record.

Mr. Hanyu is also a shogi player who will go down in the history of shogi, but Mr. Fujii is a talented player who has broken the records of Mr. Hanyu and others one after another.

In addition, he was born in Aichi prefecture as same aslike me, so I feel familiara connection with him.

I knew onlyonly know the basic rules of shogi, but I studied a little under the influence of Mr. Fujii.

I sometimes play shogi with my nephew.

I can still win the games, because my nephew is only 8 years old :)

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Nicely written! I would like to learn how to play shogi someday :)

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milkyway

Dec. 28, 2022

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CongratulationsWhat an achievement!

説明してくれて、ありがとう。
とても良くわかりました。

Shogi (Japanese chess)


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Shogi (Japanese cChess)

Chess is important in the title so we capitalize the first letter.

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According to the news, a shogi player Souta Fujii became the youngest player to win 300 games in total.


According to the news, a shogi player named Souta Fujii became the youngest player to win 300 games in total.

According to the news, a shogi player named Souta Fujii became the youngest player to win 300 games in total.

おめでとうございます!

According to the news, a shogi player named Souta Fujii became the youngest player to win 300 games in total.

Congratulations!


CongratulationsWhat an achievement!

うまく説明できないけど、英語には「Congratulations!」は話し言葉的なので、文書とか記事にはあまり使いません。なぜなら「Congratulations!」を書いたら著者が読者に祝いを述べると聞こえます。

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CongratulationsGood for him!

You only really say "congratulations" to the person you're congratulating.

He broke Mr. Habu’s previous record.


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Mr. Hanyu is also a shogi player who will go down in the history of shogi, but Mr. Fujii is a talented player who has broken the records of Mr. Hanyu and others one after another.


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Mr. Hanyu is also a shoginother player who will go down in the history of shogi, but Mr. Fujii is a talented player who has broken the records of Mr. Hanyu and others one after another.

In addition, he was born in Aichi prefecture as same as me, so I feel familiar with him.


In addition, he was born in Aichi prefecture as same aslike me, so I feel familiara connection with him.

In addition, he was born in Aichi prefecture asthe same as meI was, so I feel familiara kinship with him.

いいですね。

In addition, he was born in Aichi prefecture as, same as me, so I feel familiar withclose to him.

I found it hard to come up with a better expression for the last part of your sentence ("...so I feel familiar with him"), so don't take my correction as gospel!

I knew only the basic rules of shogi, but I studied a little under the influence of Mr. Fujii.


I knew onlyonly know the basic rules of shogi, but I studied a little under the influence of Mr. Fujii.

I kneow only the basic rules of shogi, but I studied a little under the influence of Mr. Fujii.

I knew only the basic rules of shogi, but I studied a little under the influencdecided to study a little because of Mr. Fujii.

I'm a little confused by your original sentence. Were you taught by Fujii?

I sometimes play shogi with my nephew.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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I can still win the games, because my nephew is only 8 years old :)


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I can still win the games, because my nephew is only 8 years old. :)

ハハ!

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