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Feb. 8, 2020

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Shodoshima Island Trip Plan Part 2

This summer, I'll be taking some friends from other countries to Shodoshima Island on Seto Inland Sea. I want to be able to tell them about the island.

[Angel Road]
A sand pathway shows up after the tide goes out. It's called Walkway for Angeles.
People say your wish will come true if you walk hand in hand with your loved one on this pathway to a small island of the other side. There's an observatory on the hilltop. It's called Promise Hill Observatory. People write their wishes on seashells there. We can check the time to go from the tide chart.

[Olive park]
There's an Olive Park facing Seto Inland Sea. There is an oldest olive tree there in Japan. People say, if you found a heart-shaped leaf there, hapiness would visit you later.
This park was used for a filming location of Kiki's Delivery Service, a live-action film.
You can lend a broom and take a photo of you like a Kiki sitting astride the broom.


小豆島への旅行プラン パート2

今年の夏、瀬戸内海にある小豆島へ海外の友人達を連れて行く予定です。彼らに小豆島について説明できるようになりたいです。

[エンジェルロード(天使の散歩道)]
潮が引くと砂の道が現れます。
天使の散歩道とも呼ばれています。
大切な人と手をつないで向こう岸の小さな島まで渡ると願いか叶うと言われています。丘の上に展望台があり、約束の丘展望台と言われています。そこで貝に願いを書きます。潮の満ち引きは潮時表でチェックできます。

[オリーブ公園]
瀬戸内海をのぞむオリーブ公園があります。そこには国内最古のオリーブの木があります。ハート型のオリーブの葉を見つけたら幸せが訪れると言われてます。
この公園は実写版「魔女の宅急便」のロケ地に使われました。ホウキを借りることができるので、キキのようにホウキにまたがった自分の写真をとることができます。

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Shodoshima Island Trip Plan Part 2

This summer, I'll be taking some friends from other countries to Shodoshima Island onin the Seto Inland Sea.

I want to be able to tell them about the island.

[Angel Road]

A sand pathway shows upappears after the tide goes out.

It's called Walkway for Angeles"Angel Road".

I looked it up online, and it seems that the accepted English translation for that stretch of sand is "Angel Road".

People say your wish will come true if you walk hand in hand with your loved one on this pathway to a small island ofat the other sideend of the path.

There's an observatory on thea hilltop on the island.

It's called "Promiseing Hill Observatory.Vista Point"

This is the English name for the location that I found when Googling >.>

People write their wishes on seashells there.

We can check the time to go from the tidide charts to know when we chartve to go.

[Olive park]

There's an park called Olive Park facing the Seto Inland Sea.

There is an oldest olive tree there in Japan is there.

People say, that if you fouind a heart-shaped leaf theron the tree, happiness would visitill come to you later.

Thise park was used foras a filming location for the live-action version of "Kiki's Delivery Service, a live-action film".

You can lendborrow a broom and take a photo of you like a Kikirself sitting astride the broomit like Kiki.

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michiru

Feb. 9, 2020

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Thank you very much

Shodoshima Island Trip Plan Part 2

This summer, I'll be taking some friends from other countries to Shodoshima Island oin Seto Inland Sea.

I want to be able to tell them about the island.

[Angel Road]

A sand pathway shows upappears after the tide goes out.

Or: A sand pathway is accessible after the tide goes out.

It's called Walkway for Angeles. The pathway leads to a small island.

People say your wish will come true if you walk hand in hand with your loved one on thise pathway to a small island of the other side.

There's an observatory on the hilltop of the island.

It's called Promise Hill Observatory.

People write their wishes on seashells there.

We can checkfind the time to go fromvisit on the tide chart.

[Olive park]

There's an Olive Park facing Seto Inland Sea.

There is an oldest olive tree there in Japan is located in the park.

People say, if you fouind a heart-shaped leaf there, hapiness would visit you lateryou will be blessed with happiness.

This park was used foras a filming location for the live-action film of Kiki's Delivery Service, a live-action film.

You can lendborrow (rent?) a broom and takhave a photo taken of you like a Kiki sitting astride the broom just like Kiki.

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Very nice job. Sounds like a nice plan!

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michiru

Feb. 8, 2020

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Thank you very much! I learned a nice phrase, "You will be blessed with happiness" I definitely will use this😄

Shodoshima Island Trip Plan Part 2


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This summer, I'll be taking some friends from other countries to Shodoshima Island on Seto Inland Sea.


This summer, I'll be taking some friends from other countries to Shodoshima Island oin Seto Inland Sea.

This summer, I'll be taking some friends from other countries to Shodoshima Island onin the Seto Inland Sea.

I want to be able to tell them about the island.


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[Angel Road]


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A sand pathway shows up after the tide goes out.


A sand pathway shows upappears after the tide goes out.

Or: A sand pathway is accessible after the tide goes out.

A sand pathway shows upappears after the tide goes out.

It's called Walkway for Angeles.


It's called Walkway for Angeles. The pathway leads to a small island.

It's called Walkway for Angeles"Angel Road".

I looked it up online, and it seems that the accepted English translation for that stretch of sand is "Angel Road".

People say your wish will come true if you walk hand in hand with your loved one on this pathway to a small island of the other side.


People say your wish will come true if you walk hand in hand with your loved one on thise pathway to a small island of the other side.

People say your wish will come true if you walk hand in hand with your loved one on this pathway to a small island ofat the other sideend of the path.

There's an observatory on the hilltop.


There's an observatory on the hilltop of the island.

There's an observatory on thea hilltop on the island.

It's called Promise Hill Observatory.


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It's called "Promiseing Hill Observatory.Vista Point"

This is the English name for the location that I found when Googling >.>

People write their wishes on seashells there.


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We can check the time to go from the tide chart.


We can checkfind the time to go fromvisit on the tide chart.

We can check the time to go from the tidide charts to know when we chartve to go.

[Olive park]


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There's an Olive Park facing Seto Inland Sea.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There's an park called Olive Park facing the Seto Inland Sea.

There is an oldest olive tree there in Japan.


There is an oldest olive tree there in Japan is located in the park.

There is an oldest olive tree there in Japan is there.

People say, if you found a heart-shaped leaf there, hapiness would visit you later.


People say, if you fouind a heart-shaped leaf there, hapiness would visit you lateryou will be blessed with happiness.

People say, that if you fouind a heart-shaped leaf theron the tree, happiness would visitill come to you later.

This park was used for a filming location of Kiki's Delivery Service, a live-action film.


This park was used foras a filming location for the live-action film of Kiki's Delivery Service, a live-action film.

Thise park was used foras a filming location for the live-action version of "Kiki's Delivery Service, a live-action film".

You can lend a broom and take a photo of you like a Kiki sitting astride the broom.


You can lendborrow (rent?) a broom and takhave a photo taken of you like a Kiki sitting astride the broom just like Kiki.

You can lendborrow a broom and take a photo of you like a Kikirself sitting astride the broomit like Kiki.

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