Nov. 9, 2024
Shinjuku Gyoen (97)
I went to Shinjuku Gyoen in Tokyo with my friends last Monday.
The park is very famous, but I had never been there.
There were some huge grassy areas and lots of people were laying down relaxing there.
The place I really liked in the park was the avenue of London Planes.
It was amazing. It was like a scene from a movie.
I was completely captivated by the avenue, and took a lot of pictures of it.
友達と先週の月曜日、東京の新宿御苑に行きました。
その公園は有名ですが行ったことがありませんでした。
そこには芝生広場があってたくさんの人たちが寝転がってリラックスしていました。
その公園で、私が一番気に入った場所は、プラタナス並木です。
ほんとに素晴らしかったです。映画のワンシーンのようでした。
本当に素敵で、たくさん写真を撮ってしまいました。
Shinjuku Gyoen
I went to Shinjuku Gyoen in Tokyo with my friends last Monday.
The park is very famous, but I had never been there.
There were some huge grassy areas and lots of people were laying down relaxing there.
The place I really liked in the park was the avenue of London Planes.
It was amazing.
It was like a scene from a movie.
I was completely captivated by the avenue, and took a lot of pictures of it.
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Sounds really nice! I'd love to go sometime.
Have you ever seen the anime movie 言の葉の庭 The Garden of Words? Apparently the movie is set in Shinjuku Gyoen. I watched it a few years ago.
Nov. 9, 2024
Yes, my friend told me that, and I took the picture of the pavilion that showed up in the movie. But I've never seen it before, so I want to watch it soon. Thank you so much for your corrections!
Shinjuku Gyoen
I went to Shinjuku Gyoen in Tokyo with my friends last Monday.
The park is very famous, but I had never been there before.
There were some huge grassy areas and lots of people were laying down and relaxing there.
Only use 'laying' if you are laying something else down, e.g. laying down a pen.
The place I really liked in the park was the avenue of London Planes.
If there was more than one place you really liked, you could also say 'One of the places I really liked in the park was the avenue of London Planes.'
It was amazing.
It was like a scene from a movie.
I was completely captivated by the avenue, and took a lot of pictures of it.
Nov. 9, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
I went to Shinjuku Gyoen in Tokyo with my friends last Monday.
The original sentence is fine!
IMO a little more natural to start the sentence with "Last Monday":
"Last Monday, I went to Shinjuku Gyoen in Tokyo with my friends." か
"Last Monday, I went with my friends to Shinjuku Gyoen in Tokyo."
The park is very famous, but I had never been there before.
There were some huge grassy areas and lots of people were laying down relaxing there.
The place I really liked in the park was the avenue of London Planes.
Your sentence is perfect grammar.
However, I had no idea what it meant and had to Google it. I had no idea "London Planes" were a type of tree.
Recommended:
"The place I liked most (in the park) was a path lined with trees called The Avenue of London Planes".
It was amazing.
It was like a scene from a movie.
I was completely captivated by how beautiful the avenue was, and took a lot of pictures of it.
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Great post!
Nov. 9, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanation as always.
I went to Shinjuku Gyoen in Tokyo with my friends last Monday.
The park is very famous, but I ha’d never been there before.
Alternative.
There were some hularge grassy areas and lots of people were laying down relaxing there.
I’ve never been to Shinjuku Gyoen so I can’t be sure, but “huge” really refers to something very, very large. Most parks would not be big enough to warrant the use of “huge” here.
The place I really liked in the park was the avenue of London Planes.
It was amazing.
It was like a scene from a movie.
I was completely captivated by the avenue, and took a lot of pictures of it.
Nov. 9, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
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I went to Shinjuku Gyoen in Tokyo with my friends last Monday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I went to Shinjuku Gyoen in Tokyo with my friends last Monday. The original sentence is fine! IMO a little more natural to start the sentence with "Last Monday": "Last Monday, I went to Shinjuku Gyoen in Tokyo with my friends." か "Last Monday, I went with my friends to Shinjuku Gyoen in Tokyo." This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There were some huge grassy areas and lots of people were laying down relaxing there. There were some I’ve never been to Shinjuku Gyoen so I can’t be sure, but “huge” really refers to something very, very large. Most parks would not be big enough to warrant the use of “huge” here. There were some huge grassy areas and lots of people were laying down relaxing There were some huge grassy areas and lots of people were l Only use 'laying' if you are laying something else down, e.g. laying down a pen. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The place I really liked in the park was the avenue of London Planes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The place I really liked in the park was the avenue of London Planes. Your sentence is perfect grammar. However, I had no idea what it meant and had to Google it. I had no idea "London Planes" were a type of tree. Recommended: "The place I liked most (in the park) was a path lined with trees called The Avenue of London Planes". The place I really liked in the park was the avenue of London Planes. If there was more than one place you really liked, you could also say 'One of the places I really liked in the park was the avenue of London Planes.' This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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