April 7, 2023
Shin chan
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you find in a textbook, please correct me so that I can sound like a native🙇♂️
It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!
A: Have you ever seen Crayon Shin-chan is?
B: Nope. What's like?
A: I guess it's like a Japanese version of The Simpsons. It's an anime about a crazy family! It's mostly just jokes and sometimes there are some episodes that move me. I recommend it!! I'd love to hear your thoughts on it.
B: I used to like The Simpsons, so I might like it!
A: Oh really! But I've probably heard somewhere that a lot of foreigners don't like the main character.
B: Really?
A: Yeah, I guess they think it's a children's anime, but a lot of Japanese adults like it too! The movies "Sengoku" and "Otona Teikoku" are the best ones.
B : I think I've heard of "Otona Teikoku.
A : Oh, really!
B: I've never seen it, though.
A: Please watch it when you have time! I've never heard of anyone in Japan who doesn't like this film. Not sure what people from overseas will think, but you should!
B: Ok! I'll check it out!
A: Also, if you haven't seen the anime, some things might need a little explanation, so it might be a good idea to become familiar with the family structure and characters beforehand.
I'd say it's an anime about this family. There are four people and a dog. Shinnosuke is the oldest. He's this really selfish five-year-old who annoys everyone around him.
B: I see. Thanks! I'll check it out!
A: Yeah, lemme know what you think!
Shin cChan
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook, p. Please correct me so that I can sound like a native. 🙇♂️
It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!
A: Have you ever seen Crayon Shin-cChan is?
見たことがありませんが、知っています！
B: Nope.
What's it like?
A: I guess it's like a Japanese version of The Simpsons.
It's an anime about a crazy family!
It's mostly just jokes andbut sometimes there are some episodes that move me.
I recommend it!!
I'd love to hear your thoughts on it.
B: I used to like The Simpsons, so I might like it!
A: Oh, really!
But I've probably think I've heard somewhere that a lot of foreignerinternationals don't like the main character.
B: Really?
A: Yeah, I guess they think it's a children's animen anime for kids, but a lot of Japanese adults like it, too!
The movies "Sengoku" and "Otona Teikoku" are the best ones.
B : I think I've heard of "Otona Teikoku.
A : Oh, really!
B: I've never seen it, though.
A: Please watch it when you have time!
I've never heard of anyone in Japan who doesn't like ithis film.
Not sure what people from overseas will think, but you should try watching it!
B: Okay!
I'll check it out!
A: Also, if you haven't seen the anime, some things might need a little explanation, so it might be a good idea to become familiar with the family structure and characters beforehand.
I'd say it's an anime about this family.
There are four people and a dog.
Shinnosuke is the oldest.
He's this really selfish five-year-old who annoys everyone around him.
B: I see.
Thanks!
I'll check it out!
A: Yeah, lemme know what you think!
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上手に書けています！
April 10, 2023
ありがとうございます！！🙇♂️
A: Have you ever seen Crayon Shin-chan is?
B: Nope.
What's it like?
It'd be more natural to respond "What's it about?"
A: I guess it's like a Japanese version of The Simpsons.
It's an anime about a crazy family!
It's mostly just jokes and sometimes there are some episodes that move me. / It's mostly just jokes but sometimes there are some really emotional episodes
I recommend it!!
I'd love to hear your thoughts on it.
B: I used to like The Simpsons, so I might like it!
A: Oh really!
But I've probably heard (somewhere) that a lot of foreigners don't like the main character.
It's not exactly wrong, but adding "probably" implies that the speaker isn't sure that he actually heard it somewhere, which doesn't really fit the sentence
B: Really?
A: Yeah, I guess they think it's a children's anime, but a lot of Japanese adults like it too!
The movies "Sengoku" and "Otona Teikoku" are the best ones.
B : I think I've heard of "Otona Teikoku.
A : Oh, really!
B: I've never seen it, though.
A: Please watch it when you have time!
I've never heard of anyone in Japan who doesn't like this film. / I don't know anyone in Japan who doesn't like this film.
N(I'm) not sure what people from overseas will think, but you should watch it!
B: Ok!
I'll check it out!
A: Also, if you haven't seen the anime, some things might need a little explanation, so it might be a good idea to become familiar with the family structure and characters beforehand.
I'd say it's an anime about this family.
There are four people and a dog.
Shinnosuke is the oldest.
He's this really selfish five-year-old who annoys everyone around him.
B: I see.
Thanks!
I'll check it out!
A: Yeah, lemme know what you think!
April 10, 2023
Your examples are very helpful! It is exactly what I wanted to say! Thank you so much!🙇♂️
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