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b230tri

April 1, 2022

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She quit the job.

She quit the job. She had worked on the eco environment scene. She had a PhD degree and educated people. I bought a cake and visited her. Her family welcomed me warmly.

Actually, she had suffered from her work. Her workplace was a big governmental institution. Maybe you heard of the bureaucracy. It was what it was. The mean supervisors who wasn't understandable. Too high a goal that pressed the employees. However they were envious of each others rather than loved each others. There were even hysterical manners that many employees cheated their performance reports.

She had been against them. She had fought for a long time. She was a bit principled and didn't compromise easily.

She said she was delighted to quit her job. And she said she'll never go back to there again.

A little while ago, she and her husband had not get along well. But today, they seemed to get along well and be in good mood. I hope this change would give good impact to her and her family.

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She had worked oin the eco environment sceneal sector.

She had a PhD degree and was an educated peoplerson.

Actually, she had suwas affercted frombadly due to her work.

The mean supervisors who waseren't understandable.

was=singular

Too high a goal that pressured the employees.

However they were envious of each others rather than loved each others.one another and (did not get along well)

There were even hysterical mannerumors that many employees cheated on their performance reports.

She was a bithad principleds/morals and didn't compromise easily.

And she said she'll would never go back to there again.

A little while ago, she and her husband hadwere not getting along well.

But today, they seemed to get along well and be in a good mood.

I hope this change would give good impact toill bring her and her family prosperity.

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well done!

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b230tri

April 2, 2022

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Thank you. :D

She quit the job.


She quit the job.


She had worked on the eco environment scene.


She had worked oin the eco environment sceneal sector.

She had a PhD degree and educated people.


She had a PhD degree and was an educated peoplerson.

I bought a cake and visited her.


Her family welcomed me warmly.


Actually, she had suffered from her work.


Actually, she had suwas affercted frombadly due to her work.

Her workplace was a big governmental institution.


Maybe you heard of the bureaucracy.


It was what it was.


The mean supervisors who wasn't understandable.


The mean supervisors who waseren't understandable.

was=singular

Too high a goal that pressed the employees.


Too high a goal that pressured the employees.

However they were envious of each others rather than loved each others.


However they were envious of each others rather than loved each others.one another and (did not get along well)

There were even hysterical manners that many employees cheated their performance reports.


There were even hysterical mannerumors that many employees cheated on their performance reports.

She had been against them.


She had fought for a long time.


She was a bit principled and didn't compromise easily.


She was a bithad principleds/morals and didn't compromise easily.

She said she was delighted to quit her job.


And she said she'll never go back to there again.


And she said she'll would never go back to there again.

A little while ago, she and her husband had not get along well.


A little while ago, she and her husband hadwere not getting along well.

But today, they seemed to get along well and be in good mood.


But today, they seemed to get along well and be in a good mood.

I hope this change would give good impact to her and her family.


I hope this change would give good impact toill bring her and her family prosperity.

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