March 25, 2020
Shazam Part 2
This article definitely contains spoilers.
Continuation from last time of the rundown.
The villain is a man who couldn't pass the Shazam test by the old Shazam when he was a child. This villain killed this old Shazam and gained an evil power with monsters.
Billy had moved from foster parent to foster parent. But finally he met a nice couple. This couple were also raised up in a foster home, and took in four children before Billy after they married. The family was not going well first, but after Billy's secret was revealed to the siblings, they started to cooperate with Billy.
This villain was so strong that Billy was struggling to fight. Billy's siblings helped him. At the climax, Billy stood a magic wand holding which the old wizard passed on to him, and told his siblings to clutch it. They said “Shazam” together, and then, all of them turned into adult Shazam. The Shazam team defeated the villain and his monsters.
I like this story very much!
Billy's real mom marooned him at a festival when he was a little boy because she was too young to raise him up. Billy met his mom in person while the nice foster couple took him in, but he was rejected by her. Among hero's stories I know, Billy is the first hero who has a really miserable background. But he gained a new family whose members are all good and cheerful and kind. Also, I think this foster parents are very happy because their children are all Shazam though they don't know.
At the ending scene, Superman appers at the last scene.
This is really irresistible to fans 😍
シャザム パート２
完全にネタバレ文です。前回のあらすじの続きです。
悪者は、子供の頃、お爺さんシャザムによるシャザムのテストに合格しなかった男である。この悪者はお爺さんシャザムを殺し、化け物と一緒に悪の力を手に入れた。
ビリーは里親を転々としていたが、やっと素敵な夫婦に会えた。この夫婦もまた孤児院で育ち、結婚後、ビリーの前に４名の里子を引き受けていた。最初、家族はうまくいってなかったが、ビリーの秘密が兄弟達にバレると、彼らはビリーに協力をするようになった。
悪者がめちゃ強くビリーは苦戦していた。兄弟姉妹が助けてくれた。クライマックスで、ビリーはお爺ちゃんシャザムから渡された魔法の杖を持ちながら立て、兄弟全員に杖を掴むように言った。全員で「シャザム」と唱えると、兄弟全員が大人のシャザムになった。シャザムチームで悪者と化け物を倒した。
私はこの話がとっても大好き。
ビリーの本当の母親は、若過ぎてビリーを育てられないので、ビリーがまだ小さな子供の時、お祭りでビリーを置き去りにした。素敵な里親の夫婦がビリーを引き取った後、ビリーは母親に直接会うが拒絶される。私が知ってるヒーローものでビリーが一番生い立ちが悲惨である。でも彼は素敵で明るく親切な新しい家族を手に入れた。そして、この里親はすごく幸せだと思う。彼らは知らないが、里子は全員シャザムである。
最後のシーンでスーパーマンが出てくる。これはファンにはたまらない!
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"This couple" is considered singular, despite it referring to two people.
Someone is "raised" in a home or someone is "brought up" in a home.
They said “Shazam” together, and then, all of themat the same time, and then, they all turned into adult Shazamsuperheros.
Billy's real mom maroonedleft him at a festival when he was a little boy because she was too young to raise him upherself.
The verb "maroon" means to be left somewhere inaccessible, like an island. Another alternative: "She abandoned him"
You can also say "Billy's biological mom" since his "real mom" will likely become the new foster mom.
Billy met his mom in person wWhile the nice foster couple took him in, Billy met his mom in person, but he was rejected by her.
It is easier to read the events when they are in order. 1. The couple took him in 2. he met his mom 3. she rejected her
Among all the (super)hero's stories I know, Billy is the first heroone who has a really miserable background.
April 3, 2020
Thank you for the corrections and the explanations!
Shazam Part 2
This article definitely contains spoilers.
Continuationed from the last time of the rundownsummary.
I think summary is a bit more natural for stories.
The villain is a man who couldn't pass the Shazam test given by the old Shazam when he was a child.
This villain killed thise old Shazam and gained an evil power withto control monsters.
"evil power with monsters" is a bit unnatural
Billy had moved from foster parenthome to foster parenthome.
Parent refers to just one person, but in this case you're talking about the family too.
But finally he met a nice couple.
This couple were also raised up in a foster home, and took in four children before Billy after they married.
The family was not going well firstBilly didn't get on well with the family, but after Billy'his secret was revealed to the siblings, they started to cooperate with Billy.
「うまくいってない」のはビリーのせいですね 。
'The family was not going well first' means that everyone wasn't getting along, but I think the problems are caused by Billy.
This villain was so strong that Billy was struggling to fight him.
Billy's siblings helped him.
At the film's climax, Billy stood holding a magic wand holding which the old wizard passed on to him, and told his siblings to clutch it.
They said “Shazam” together, and then, all of them turned into adult Shazam.
The Shazam team defeated the villain and his monsters.
I like this story very much!
Billy's real mom marooned him at a festival when he was a little boy because she was too young to raise him up.
'Marooned' is usually to do with leaving someone in the sea.
Billy met his mom in person while the nice foster couple took him in, but he was rejected by her.
Among the superhero's stories I know, Billy is the firstonly hero who has had a really miserable background.
But he gained a new family whose members are all good and cheerful and kind.
Also, I think this foster parents are very happy because their children are all Shazam though they don't know.
AtIn the ending scene, Superman appears at the last scene.
This is really irresistible to fanFans would really love this 😍
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Well written! The ending really was quite funny.
March 28, 2020
Thank you very much for correcting my long post! Yes It's a very funny movie.
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The villain is a man who couldn't pass the Shazam test by the old Shazam when he was a child. The villain is a man who couldn't pass the Shazam test given by the old Shazam when he was a child. |
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Billy had moved from foster parent to foster parent. Billy had moved from foster Parent refers to just one person, but in this case you're talking about the family too. |
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This couple were also raised up in a foster home, and took in four children before Billy after they married. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This married couple w "This couple" is considered singular, despite it referring to two people. Someone is "raised" in a home or someone is "brought up" in a home. |
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The family was not going well first, but after Billy's secret was revealed to the siblings, they started to cooperate with Billy.
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This villain was so strong that Billy was struggling to fight. This villain was so strong that Billy was struggling to fight him. |
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At the climax, Billy stood a magic wand holding which the old wizard passed on to him, and told his siblings to clutch it. At the film's climax, Billy stood holding a magic wand |
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Billy's real mom marooned him at a festival when he was a little boy because she was too young to raise him up. Billy's real mom marooned him at a festival when he was a little boy because she was too young to raise him up. 'Marooned' is usually to do with leaving someone in the sea. Billy's real mom The verb "maroon" means to be left somewhere inaccessible, like an island. Another alternative: "She abandoned him" You can also say "Billy's biological mom" since his "real mom" will likely become the new foster mom. |
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Billy met his mom in person while the nice foster couple took him in, but he was rejected by her. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
It is easier to read the events when they are in order. 1. The couple took him in 2. he met his mom 3. she rejected her |
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Among hero's stories I know, Billy is the first hero who has a really miserable background. Among the superhero's stories I know, Billy is the Among all the (super)hero |
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But he gained a new family whose members are all good and cheerful and kind. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, I think this foster parents are very happy because their children are all Shazam though they don't know. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At the ending scene, Superman appers at the last scene.
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This is really irresistible to fans 😍
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