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Jan. 18, 2024

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Sharing Bicycle

I drive sharing bicycle to work everyday. There is an interesting history of sharing bicycles.
Nearly 20 years ago, the first sharing bicycle was born in a university, the inventor who was a college student, want to solve the problem that some of the students can’t afford to buy one. And some of them thought it was troublesome to buy in a bicycle and four years later to sell out. So he invited sharing bicycle.
At that time, people who wanted to use the sharing ones need to pay deposit fee which was 99 yuan. Hundreds and thousands people paid, the capital pool was so large but having no supervision. So those money was no accidentally misappropriated.
Then the first sharing bicycle company went bankrupt, on the same time, they couldn’t pay the deposit fee back to the usages. The founder’s fortune was frozen. But it’s not enough to pay off.
After this case, the government introduced regulatory measures to forbidden misappropriation.
Nowadays, sharing bicycles serves are all provided by big companies because this business need heavy assets. Those companies have no problem with cash flow. On the other hand, the competition between those big companies is hit because they provide the same services. Finally, sharing bicycle become famous all over the country with a different body color so that no one would drive it back home. Because of those reasons, now it do not requests a deposit before using.

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Bike Sharing Bicycle

When focussing (US orthography: «focusing») on the industry rather than the physical bikes, «bike sharing» is the term.

I drivde a sharing bicycled bike to work everyday.

There iBike sharing has an interesting history of sharing bicycles.

Nearly 20 years ago, the first bike-sharing bicyclscheme was born in a university, t. The inventor who was a college student, wantaiming to solve the problem thatof some of the students can’t afford to buybeing unable to afford one.

And some of themIn addition, some thought it was troublesome to buy inacquire a bicycle and four years later to sell outthen sell it after four years.

So he invited bike sharing bicycle.

At that time, people who wanted to use the sharing ones needed to pay deposit fee which wasa 99 -yuan deposit.

Hundreds andof thousands people paid, t. The capital pool was sovery large but havingd no supervision.

英语:
- 数万:tens of thousands
- 数十万:hundreds of thousands
- 数百万:millions

So thoseat money was— by no accidentally — was misappropriated.

Then the first bike-sharing bicycle company went bankrupt, on the same time,at which they couldn’t pay the deposit fees back to the usagers.

English has this feature of «relative pronouns», which can be used to construct sentences more precisely and succinctly.
英语有「关系代词」这个功能,可以更精准和简短地构句。

The founder’s fortune was frozen.

But it’s not enough to pay off.

After this case, the government introduced regulatory measures to forbiddenprohibit misappropriation.

Nowadays, bike-sharing bicycles services are all provided by big companies, because thisese businesses need heavy assets.

Those companies have no problem with cash flow.

On the other hand, the competition betweenis impeded because those big companies is hit because they provide the same services.

Finally, sharing bicycle become famouLast interesting point: Shared bikes all over the country are deployed with a differentstinctive body colors, so that no one would drivde it back home.

Because of those reasons, now it do not requests a deposita deposit is no longer required before using.

Sharing BicycleBicycle Sharing

I would actually phrase the title in this order. "A Bing" is a common pattern. For example:
apple picking
house hunting
grocery shopping
etc.

I drivede a sharinged bicycle to work everyday.

There isShared bicycles have an interesting history of sharing bicycles.

Nearly 20 years ago, the first sharinged bicycle was born inat a university, t. The inventor, who was a college student, wanted to solve the problem that some of the students can’t afford to buy onetheir own bicycles.

And some of them thought it was troublesome to buy in a bicycle and sell it four years later to sell out.

So he inviented the sharinged bicycle.

At that time, people who wanted to use the sharinged ones needed to pay a deposit (fee) which was 99 yuan.

Hundreds and thousands people paid, the capital pool was. The profits were so large but havingd no supervision.

So ithose money was no accidentally that that money was misappropriated.

Then the first sharinged bicycle company went bankrupt, on. At the same time, they couldn’t pay the deposit fee back to the usagers.

The founder’s fortune was frozen.

But it was not enough to pay everything off.

After this case, the government introduced regulatory measures to forbidden misappropriation.

Nowadays, sharinged bicycles services are all provided by big companies because this business needs heavy assets.

Those companies have no problem with cash flow.

On the other hand, the competition between those big companies is hit because they provide the same services(s).

Finally, sharinged bicycles becoame famous all over the country with a different bodystinct paint color so that no one would drivtake it back home.

Because of those reasons, now a deposit dois not requests a depositired before usinge.

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That's an interesting story!

SharingRental Bicycle

You could also say "shared" bicycle, but I think "rental" is easiest to understand. Also, many people say "bike" instead of bicycle!

I drive sharing bicycla rental bike to work everyday.

Nearly 20 years ago, the first sharing bicyclrental bike was born inat a university, t. The inventor, who was a college student, wanted to solve the problem that some of the students can’ouldn't afford to buy one.

The sentence is a little easier to understand if you make it two sentences! And since this was 20 years ago, you need the past tense.

And some of them thought it was troublesome to buy in a bicyclke and sell it four years later to sell out.

"Sell out" usually has a different meaning. If you write "sell it", then the "it" refers to the bike.

So he inviented sharing bicyclthe rental bike.

"Invited" means to ask someone to come somewhere. You might invite your friend to your house. "Invented" means to make something.

At that time, people who wanted to use the sharing onrental bikes needed to pay a deposit fee, which was 99 yuan.

Hundreds and thousands of people paid, so the capital pool was sovery large but havingd no supervision.

So those money was no accidentally misappropriated.

I'm not 100% sure if this is what you wanted to say in this sentence, but I hope this is what you wanted to write.

Then the first sharing bicyclrental bike company went bankrupt, onso at the same time, they couldn’t pay the deposit fee back to the usagers.

"Usage" is "to use" an item. "User" is a person who uses it.

But it’s no wasn't enough to pay off the debt.

"Debt" means the money that founder owed to the users.

After this case, the government introduced regulatory measures to forbidden misappropriation.

You could also say to "prevent misappropriation", both words would be OK!

Nowadays, sharing bicyclesrental bike services are all provided by big companies because this business needs heavy assets.

"Serves" is the same as "to serve". "Services" means the things that a company does for its customers.

On the other hand, the competition between those big companies is hitfierce because they provide the same services.

If you say "the competition is hit", it means that the competition is *weaker*. But the phrase "competition is fierce" means that the competition is strong. I think that's the meaning you wanted?

Finally, sharing bicyclerental bikes becoame famous all over the country, with a different body colors so that no one would drive ithem back home.

There is more than one company making rental bikes, so I assume they use different colors.

Because of those reasons, now it does not requests a deposit before using.

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Thank you for teaching us about the history of rental bikes! I didn't know any of this, so I have learned something too :)

Sharing Bicycle


SharingRental Bicycle

You could also say "shared" bicycle, but I think "rental" is easiest to understand. Also, many people say "bike" instead of bicycle!

Sharing BicycleBicycle Sharing

I would actually phrase the title in this order. "A Bing" is a common pattern. For example: apple picking house hunting grocery shopping etc.

Bike Sharing Bicycle

When focussing (US orthography: «focusing») on the industry rather than the physical bikes, «bike sharing» is the term.

I drive sharing bicycle to work everyday.


I drive sharing bicycla rental bike to work everyday.

I drivede a sharinged bicycle to work everyday.

I drivde a sharing bicycled bike to work everyday.

There is an interesting history of sharing bicycles.


There isShared bicycles have an interesting history of sharing bicycles.

There iBike sharing has an interesting history of sharing bicycles.

Nearly 20 years ago, the first sharing bicycle was born in a university, the inventor who was a college student, want to solve the problem that some of the students can’t afford to buy one.


Nearly 20 years ago, the first sharing bicyclrental bike was born inat a university, t. The inventor, who was a college student, wanted to solve the problem that some of the students can’ouldn't afford to buy one.

The sentence is a little easier to understand if you make it two sentences! And since this was 20 years ago, you need the past tense.

Nearly 20 years ago, the first sharinged bicycle was born inat a university, t. The inventor, who was a college student, wanted to solve the problem that some of the students can’t afford to buy onetheir own bicycles.

Nearly 20 years ago, the first bike-sharing bicyclscheme was born in a university, t. The inventor who was a college student, wantaiming to solve the problem thatof some of the students can’t afford to buybeing unable to afford one.

And some of them thought it was troublesome to buy in a bicycle and four years later to sell out.


And some of them thought it was troublesome to buy in a bicyclke and sell it four years later to sell out.

"Sell out" usually has a different meaning. If you write "sell it", then the "it" refers to the bike.

And some of them thought it was troublesome to buy in a bicycle and sell it four years later to sell out.

And some of themIn addition, some thought it was troublesome to buy inacquire a bicycle and four years later to sell outthen sell it after four years.

So he invited sharing bicycle.


So he inviented sharing bicyclthe rental bike.

"Invited" means to ask someone to come somewhere. You might invite your friend to your house. "Invented" means to make something.

So he inviented the sharinged bicycle.

So he invited bike sharing bicycle.

At that time, people who wanted to use the sharing ones need to pay deposit fee which was 99 yuan.


At that time, people who wanted to use the sharing onrental bikes needed to pay a deposit fee, which was 99 yuan.

At that time, people who wanted to use the sharinged ones needed to pay a deposit (fee) which was 99 yuan.

At that time, people who wanted to use the sharing ones needed to pay deposit fee which wasa 99 -yuan deposit.

Hundreds and thousands people paid, the capital pool was so large but having no supervision.


Hundreds and thousands of people paid, so the capital pool was sovery large but havingd no supervision.

Hundreds and thousands people paid, the capital pool was. The profits were so large but havingd no supervision.

Hundreds andof thousands people paid, t. The capital pool was sovery large but havingd no supervision.

英语: - 数万:tens of thousands - 数十万:hundreds of thousands - 数百万:millions

So those money was no accidentally misappropriated.


So those money was no accidentally misappropriated.

I'm not 100% sure if this is what you wanted to say in this sentence, but I hope this is what you wanted to write.

So ithose money was no accidentally that that money was misappropriated.

So thoseat money was— by no accidentally — was misappropriated.

Then the first sharing bicycle company went bankrupt, on the same time, they couldn’t pay the deposit fee back to the usages.


Then the first sharing bicyclrental bike company went bankrupt, onso at the same time, they couldn’t pay the deposit fee back to the usagers.

"Usage" is "to use" an item. "User" is a person who uses it.

Then the first sharinged bicycle company went bankrupt, on. At the same time, they couldn’t pay the deposit fee back to the usagers.

Then the first bike-sharing bicycle company went bankrupt, on the same time,at which they couldn’t pay the deposit fees back to the usagers.

English has this feature of «relative pronouns», which can be used to construct sentences more precisely and succinctly. 英语有「关系代词」这个功能,可以更精准和简短地构句。

The founder’s fortune was frozen.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But it’s not enough to pay off.


But it’s no wasn't enough to pay off the debt.

"Debt" means the money that founder owed to the users.

But it was not enough to pay everything off.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After this case, the government introduced regulatory measures to forbidden misappropriation.


After this case, the government introduced regulatory measures to forbidden misappropriation.

You could also say to "prevent misappropriation", both words would be OK!

After this case, the government introduced regulatory measures to forbidden misappropriation.

After this case, the government introduced regulatory measures to forbiddenprohibit misappropriation.

Nowadays, sharing bicycles serves are all provided by big companies because this business need heavy assets.


Nowadays, sharing bicyclesrental bike services are all provided by big companies because this business needs heavy assets.

"Serves" is the same as "to serve". "Services" means the things that a company does for its customers.

Nowadays, sharinged bicycles services are all provided by big companies because this business needs heavy assets.

Nowadays, bike-sharing bicycles services are all provided by big companies, because thisese businesses need heavy assets.

Those companies have no problem with cash flow.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

On the other hand, the competition between those big companies is hit because they provide the same services.


On the other hand, the competition between those big companies is hitfierce because they provide the same services.

If you say "the competition is hit", it means that the competition is *weaker*. But the phrase "competition is fierce" means that the competition is strong. I think that's the meaning you wanted?

On the other hand, the competition between those big companies is hit because they provide the same services(s).

On the other hand, the competition betweenis impeded because those big companies is hit because they provide the same services.

Finally, sharing bicycle become famous all over the country with a different body color so that no one would drive it back home.


Finally, sharing bicyclerental bikes becoame famous all over the country, with a different body colors so that no one would drive ithem back home.

There is more than one company making rental bikes, so I assume they use different colors.

Finally, sharinged bicycles becoame famous all over the country with a different bodystinct paint color so that no one would drivtake it back home.

Finally, sharing bicycle become famouLast interesting point: Shared bikes all over the country are deployed with a differentstinctive body colors, so that no one would drivde it back home.

Because of those reasons, now it do not requests a deposit before using.


Because of those reasons, now it does not requests a deposit before using.

Because of those reasons, now a deposit dois not requests a depositired before usinge.

Because of those reasons, now it do not requests a deposita deposit is no longer required before using.

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