Swimming inat the Beach Swimming at the Beach

In = inside the beach At = location wise, you are there physically

Swimming inat the Beach Swimming at the Beach

Swimming inat the Beach Swimming at the Beach

Swimming inat the Beach Swimming at the Beach

Beach is the sand part, so cannot be "in" the beach. Can be >>at<< the beach and >>in<< the sea/ocean, but not in the beach.

Swimming inat the Beach Swimming at the Beach

Today I was walking along the beach, as I commented in other journals, when the sun disappeared behind athe clouds. Today I was walking along the beach, as I commented in other journals, when the sun disappeared behind the clouds.

You could either use "a cloud" or "the clouds" here! Usually we'd say "the clouds" plural.

Today I was walking along the beach, as I commented ion other journals, when the sun disappeared behind athe clouds. Today I was walking along the beach, as I commented on other journals, when the sun disappeared behind the clouds.

Today I was walking along the beach, as I commented in other journals, when the sun suddenly disappeared behind a clouds. Today I was walking along the beach, as I commented in other journals, when the sun suddenly disappeared behind a clouds.

The clause sounds haphazardly chucked in, thus i recommended suddenly

Today I was walking along the beach, as I commentioned in other journals, when the sun disappeared behind a clouds. Today I was walking along the beach, as I mentioned in other journals, when the sun disappeared behind a cloud.

Today, I was walking along the beach, as I commenwroted in other journal entries, when the sun disappeared behind a clouds. Today, I was walking along the beach, as I wrote in other journal entries, when the sun disappeared behind a clouds.

Do you mean you wrote about walking along the beach in another journal entry? :)

Today I was walking along the beach, as I commented on in other journals, when the sun disappeared behind athe clouds. Today I was walking along the beach, as I commented on in other journals, when the sun disappeared behind the clouds.

Today I was walking along the beach, as I commented in other journals, when the sun disappeared behind a clouds. Today I was walking along the beach when the sun disappeared behind a clouds.

The part about journals is confusing and it's not relevant to the story.

There was noteren't any people apart from some people strolling, and only a person swimming in the water, that went out a bit some later. There weren't any people apart from some people strolling, and only a person swimming in the water, that went out a bit later.

"weren't any people" would fit better here, or "There were no" people. "swimming" with two ms. "A bit later", not "a bit some later" - that's just how it's phrased!

There wasere not people apart from some people strolling, and only ajust one person swimming in the water, that wentwho came out a bit some later. There were no people apart from some people strolling and just one person swimming in the water, who came out a bit later.

There was not peopl one apart from somea few people strolling, and only aone person was swimming in the water, that went out a bit some later. There was no one apart from a few people strolling, and only one person was swimming in the water.

It is assumed they left, no need last clause

There was not people apart from someeren't many people, only a few people strolling down the beach, and only ae person swimming in the water, that who went out a bit some later. There weren't many people, only a few people strolling down the beach, and one person swimming in the water who went out a bit later.

There was not peopl one else apart from some people strolling, and only aone person swimming in the water, thatwho went out a bit some later. There was no one else apart from some people strolling, and only one person swimming in the water, who went out a bit later.

There wasere not people, apart from some people strolling, and only aone person swimming in the water, that who went out a bit some later. There were no people, apart from some people strolling, and only one person swimming in the water who went out a bit later.

I would say "there were not many people, only some people strolling..."

There was not people one there, apart from some people strolling, and only ae person swimming in the water, that went out a bit some later. There was no one there, apart from some people strolling and one person swimming in the water.

The last part of the sentence is confusing. Do you mean no one was there at first, but then later some people arrived and started swimming and walking?

The sand was a bit cool, but when I arrived ato the edge, I noted slightly warm this damp sand. The sand was a bit cool, but when I arrived at the edge, I noted slightly warm this damp sand.

"arrived at" not "arrived to".

The sand was a bit cool, but when I arrived ato the edge of the water, I noticed slightly warmthat thise damp sand was slightly warm. The sand was a bit cool, but when I arrived at the edge of the water, I noticed that the damp sand was slightly warm.

The sand was a bit cool, but when I arrivedwent to theits edge, I noted slightly warm this damp sandiced/noted that it was slightly warm. The sand was a bit cool, but when I went to its edge, I noticed/noted that it was slightly warm.

The sand was a bit cool, but when I arrived to the edge, I noticed slightly warm thithat the sand was damp sand slightly warm. The sand was a bit cool, but when I arrived to the edge, I noticed that the sand was damp and slightly warm.

The sand was a bitslightly cool, but when I arrivedgot to the edge of the water, I noticed slightly warm this damp sandthe damp sand was slightly warm. The sand was slightly cool, but when I got to the edge of the water, I noticed the damp sand was slightly warm.

The sand was a bit cool, but when I arrived to the water's edge, I noted slightly warm this damp sandthe damp sand was slightly warm. The sand was a bit cool, but when I arrived to the water's edge, I noted the damp sand was slightly warm.

The sand was a bit cool, but when I arrived to the edge, I noticed slightly warm this damp sandthe damp sand was slightly warmer. The sand was a bit cool, but when I arrived to the edge, I noticed the damp sand was slightly warmer.

"Noted" means to remember a piece of information you plan to use later.

Finally, I got in the water, and later some minutes later I found me veryyself well into the water. Finally, I got in the water, and some minutes later I found myself well into the water.

We usually use "myself" for this sort of construction. We'd also use the phrase "some minutes later".

Finally, I got in the water, and later some minutes later, I found me veryyself well into the water. Finally, I got in the water, and some minutes later, I found myself well into the water.

Finally, I got in the water, and later somea few minutes later I found meyself very well into waterdeep in it. Finally, I got in the water, and a few minutes later I found myself very deep in it.

Finally, I got in the water, and later some minutes I found me very well intoa few minutes later I was enjoying the water. Finally, I got in the water, and a few minutes later I was enjoying the water.

Finally, I gotwalked into the water, and lafter somea few minutes, I found me very well intoyself deep in the water. Finally, I walked into the water, and after a few minutes, I found myself deep in the water.

Finally, I got in the water, and lafter somea few minutes I found me very wellyself far into the water. Finally, I got in the water, and after a few minutes I found myself far into the water.

Finally, I got in the water, and later some. A few minutes later I found meyself very well intodeep in the water. Finally, I got in the water. A few minutes later I found myself very deep in the water.

In that moment, I was the only person swimming, in a deserted beach in front of Barcelona city. In that moment, I was the only person swimming, in a deserted beach in front of Barcelona city.

When you say "desert" here, do you mean it was abandoned/there were not many people? If so, "deserted" would be the word you'd want.

In that moment, I was the only person swimming, in athe desert beach in front of Barcelona city. In that moment, I was the only person swimming in the desert beach in front of Barcelona city.

InAt that moment, I was the only person swimming, in a desert beach in front of Barcelona city. At that moment, I was the only person swimming in a desert beach in Barcelona.

In that moment, I was the only person swimming, in a desert beach in front of Barcelona city. In that moment, I was the only person swimming, in a desert beach in front of Barcelona city.

In that moment, I was the only person swimming, inat a deserted beach in front of Barcelona city. In that moment, I was the only person swimming, at a deserted beach in front of Barcelona city.

In that moment, I was the only person swimming, in a desert beach in front ofat beach near Barcelona city. In that moment, I was the only person swimming, at beach near Barcelona.

or in/by/close to Barcelona

In that moment, I was the only person swimming, in at a deserted beach in front of Barcelona city. In that moment, I was the only person swimming at a deserted beach in Barcelona.

You were "at" the beach because you were close to it, but not "in" the sand. We never say "a beach in front of the city" but we can say "a beach in (city)" or "a beach near (city)"

In August, there were thousands people ion that same beach. In August, there were thousands people on that same beach.

In August, there werehad been thousands people in that same beach. In August, there had been thousands people in that same beach.

Were is not incorrect, but I think had been is the more appropriate tense.

In August, there were thousands of people inat that same beach. In August, there were thousands of people at that same beach.

In August, there were thousands of people inat that same beach. In August, there were thousands of people at that same beach.

In August, there were thousands of people inat that same beach. In August, there were thousands of people at that same beach.

IBack in August, there were thousands of people inat that same beach. Back in August, there were thousands of people at that same beach.

A bit later, I wengot out of the water, and I came back home. A bit later, I got out of the water, and I came back home.

A bit later, I wengot out of the water, and I came back home. A bit later, I got out of the water and came back home.

A bit later, I wengot out of the water, and I came backwent home/I returned home. A bit later, I got out of the water, and I went home/I returned home.

Got is more stylistically consistent as your tone is informal reminiscing, journal-like and personal

A bit later, I wengot out of the water, and I came back home. A bit later, I got out of the water, and I came back home.

A bit later, I wengot out of the water, and I camewent back home. A bit later, I got out of the water, and I went back home.

A bit later, I wentcame out of the water, and I camewent back home. A bit later, I came out of the water and I went back home.