April 25, 2022
A Fast Sailboat
A lot of years ago, in a holidays at "La costa Brava" in the Mediterrean Sea, I enjoyed for two days a sailing experience. It was an impressive experience in a little but fast sailboat, with one mast and for two people. It is named if not fail my memory, "Chopper". I remember that the boom, an horizontal spar that is joined to the mast, hit my head some times the first day. When the sailboot is turning around, you must pay attention to the fast movement of the boom, and go down the head. This was one of my more fun days of that holidays.
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A lot ofMany years ago, in a holidays at "La costa Brava" in the Mediterranean Sea, I enjoyed for two days a sailing experience.
Many years ago, in a holidays at "La costa Brava" in the Mediterranean Sea, I enjoyed for two days a sailing experience.
A Fast Sailboat
A lot of years ago, during a holidays at "La costa Brava" in the Mediterranean Sea, I enjoyed fora two days a sailing experience.
A lot of years ago, during a holiday at "La costa Brava" in the Mediterranean Sea, I enjoyed a two day sailing experience.
It was an impressive experience in a little but fast sailboat, with one mast and for two people.
It iwas named if not fail my memory, "Chopper""Chopper" if my memory doesn't fail me.
It was named "Chopper" if my memory doesn't fail me.
I remember that the boom, an horizontal spar that is joined to the mast, hit my head someeveral times the first day.
I remember that the boom, an horizontal spar that is joined to the mast, hit my head several times the first day.
No està del tot clar què vols dir aquí.
When the sailbooat is turning around, you must pay attention to the fast movement of the boom, and go down the headduck.
When the sailboat is turning around, you must pay attention to the fast movement of the boom, and duck.
This was one of my more fun days of that holidays.
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Ben fet.
April 26, 2022
I remember that the boom, an horizontal spar that is joined to the mast, hit my head someeveral times the first day.
No està del tot clar què vols dir aquí.
"Recordo que la botavara, una barra horitzontal unida al pal, va colpejar el meu cap diverses vegades."
April 26, 2022
"Recordo que la botavara, una barra horitzontal unida al pal, va colpejar el meu cap diverses vegades."
En aquest cas, la meva correcció està bé tal com està.
April 27, 2022
Thanks.
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A lot of years ago, in a holidays at "La costa Brava" in the Mediterrean Sea, I enjoyed for two days a sailing experience.
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It is named if not fail my memory, "Chopper".
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I remember that the boom, an horizontal spar that is joined to the mast, hit my head some times the first day.
I remember that the boom, an horizontal spar that is joined to the mast, hit my head s No està del tot clar què vols dir aquí. |
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When the sailboot is turning around, you must pay attention to the fast movement of the boom, and go down the head.
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This was one of my more fun days of that holidays. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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