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Journal 12/1/20

If I was a girl, I promised I would not wear makeup. Why?
1, I like simple things. I think wearing makeup doesn't have any meaning, and natural beauty is real beauty.
2, wearing makeup wastes time and money. I heard some girls say that makeup would take them half an hour or a whole hour. Besides, it takes a lot of money, because makeup is generally at a high price.
3, wearing makeup is harmful to people's health. Because makeup consists of various chemical substances, some of which may be toxic. Like lipsticks, when you eat, you definitely don't avoid eating a bit of it and I think it is horrible.
Is my point correct? What is your opinion? Especially girls.

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Journal 12/1/20


If I was a girl, I promised I would not wear makeup.


If I was a girl, I promised myself I would not wear any makeup. If I was a girl, I promised myself I would not wear any makeup.

Why?


1, I like simple things.


1,. Because I like simple things. 1. Because I like simple things.

I think wearing makeup doesn't have any meaning, and natural beauty is real beauty.


2, wearing makeup wastes time and money.


2, wear. I believe using makeup wastes time and money. 2. I believe using makeup wastes time and money.

I heard some girls say that makeup would take them half an hour or a whole hour.


I heard some girls say that makeup would take them half an hour or a whole hour to do. I heard some girls say that makeup would take them half an hour or a whole hour to do.

Besides, it takes a lot of money, because makeup is generally at a high price.


Besides, it takes a lot of money, because makeup is generally at a high priceexpensive/costs a lot. Besides, it takes a lot of money, because makeup is generally expensive/costs a lot.

3, wearing makeup is harmful to people's health.


3, w. Wearing makeup is harmful to people's health. 3. Wearing makeup is harmful to people's health.

Because makeup consists of various chemical substances, some of which may be toxic.


BecausSince makeup consists of various chemical substances, some of which may be toxic, it can be harmful to one's skin. Since makeup consists of various chemical substances, some of which may be toxic, it can be harmful to one's skin.

Like lipsticks, when you eat, you definitely don't avoid eating a bit of it and I think it is horrible.


LikeFor example wearing lipsticks, when you eat, you definitely don'tit is hard to avoid eating a little bit of it and I think ithat is horrible. For example wearing lipstick when you eat, you it is hard to avoid eating a little bit of it and I think that is horrible.

Is my point correct?


Is my point correctDo I make my point/stance clear? Do I make my point/stance clear?

What is your opinion?


Especially girls.


Especially girlsI would like to hear your opinion on this topic, especially from a woman's perspective. I would like to hear your opinion on this topic, especially from a woman's perspective.

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