Sept. 21, 2021
Sex Education S3
I know this drama was on the second series.
Even just the first series was got a lot of good reviews.
But that time when I try to watch it.
I didn’t feel great at all, the jokes are too frank, the characters are not real…
So, I stop watch.
Now, is the season 3.
Surprisingly this time I can enjoy watching it.
This kind of topic is never easy to talk about.
Just pretending you are teenagers again.
You will definitely able enjoy more.
Just don’t tell your parents that is me to suggest watch this drama.
Sex Education S3
I know this drama was on the second series.
It is a bit difficult to work out what suggestions I should give concerning verb tense in any one sentence in your whole piece here. However, having read through everything beforehand, I would say that the above sentence could be written as follows:
"I knew this drama was on its second series."
Even just tThe first series was got a lot of good reviews, but I didn't like it so much because I felt the jokes were too frank and the characters unreal. So, I stopped watching it.
I have tried to bring together several of your individual sentences so as to make your text flow better.
But that time when I try to watch it.
See above.
I didn’t feel great at all, the jokes are too frank, the characters are not real…
See above.
So, I stop watch.
See above.
Now, its theon season 3.
Surprisingly, this time, I canam enjoying watching it.
This kind of topic is never easy to talk about.
However, if you Just pretending that you are a teenagers again, you will definitely enjoy it more.
Again, I've tried to make your texts flow better.
You will definitely able enjoy more.
See above.
Just don’t tell your parents that is me to suggest watch this drama.
Could be written as: "Just don't tell your parents that it was me who suggested that you should watch this drama!"
I would put an exclamation mark at the end.
Feedback
You always make a great effort with your texts. Thank you.
My advice to you is that you need to understand verb use and verb tenses more before moving on.
Also, you should try to connect your individual sentences together more, so as to improve reading fluency.
Let me know if you have any particular questions about the above and I will try to help you further.
Sincerely,
mjm
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I know this drama was on the second series. I know this drama was on the second series. It is a bit difficult to work out what suggestions I should give concerning verb tense in any one sentence in your whole piece here. However, having read through everything beforehand, I would say that the above sentence could be written as follows: "I knew this drama was on its second series." |
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Even just the first series was got a lot of good reviews.
I have tried to bring together several of your individual sentences so as to make your text flow better. |
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But that time when I try to watch it. But that time when I try to watch it. See above. |
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I didn’t feel great at all, the jokes are too frank, the characters are not real… I didn’t feel great at all, the jokes are too frank, the characters are not real… See above. |
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So, I stop watch. So, I stop watch. See above. |
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Now, is the season 3. Now, its |
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Surprisingly this time I can enjoy watching it. Surprisingly, this time, I |
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This kind of topic is never easy to talk about. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Just pretending you are teenagers again. However, if you Just pretend Again, I've tried to make your texts flow better. |
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You will definitely able enjoy more. You will definitely able enjoy more. See above. |
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Just don’t tell your parents that is me to suggest watch this drama. Just don’t tell your parents that is me to suggest watch this drama. Could be written as: "Just don't tell your parents that it was me who suggested that you should watch this drama!" I would put an exclamation mark at the end. |
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