Aug. 2, 2024
Severe Heat and My Weekend Plan
It's extremely hot recently in Shanghai and the surrounding areas. My pet fish don't want to eat, just like me, even though we stayed in the air-conditioned room all the time.
I have to give up my weekend hike plan. I'm a little upset because if I can't wake up before 6:00 tomorrow morning, I'll have to stay home all day.
If I have to do that, I will watch the Olympics live or some replay videos.
If I wake up before 6:00 AM, I will go cycling along the Huangpu River again and return before 8:00 AM. Because after that, the temperature will exceed 35°C.
The plan for Sunday is the same.
Oh, I finished an article about last Saturday's hike in Chinese a few minutes ago. If you want to see pictures or Chinese sentences, here is the link: https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/JwQpybH6QzUTJKDfbY7AOQ
Have a nice weekend!
最近上海及周边地区都非常热。我的宠物鱼像我一样，不想吃东西，即使我们一直呆在空调房间里。
我不得不放弃周末远足的计划。我有点沮丧，因为如果我明天早上6点前不能起床，我就得整天呆在家里。
如果必须这样做，我会看奥运会直播或一些重播视频。
如果在早上6点前醒来，我将再次沿着黄浦江骑自行车，并在早上8点前返回。因为在那之后，温度将超过35°C。
周日的计划一样。
哦，几分钟前我用中文写完了一篇关于上周六徒步旅行的文章。如果你想看图片或中文句子，这里是链接:https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/JwQpybH6QzUTJKDfbY7AOQ
周末愉快呀！
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Severe Heat and My Weekend Plans Severe Heat and My Weekend Plans
LOGIC: Since you plan to do more than one thing, the plural is better,
It's(COMMENT: In casual English, the original is possible.) IN STANDARD ENGLISH: It has been extremely hot recently in Shanghai and in the surrounding areas.
(COMMENT: In casual English, the original is possible.) IN STANDARD ENGLISH: It has been extremely hot recently in Shanghai and in the surrounding areas.
My pet fish don't want to eat, just like me, even though we are stayeding in thean air-conditioned room all the time.
My pet fish don't want to eat, just like me, even though we are staying in an air-conditioned room all the time.
I havedecided to give up on my weekend hike plan.
I decided to give up on my weekend hike plan.
If I have to do thatMY GUESS: If I remain at home, I will watch the Olympics live or some replay videos.
MY GUESS: If I remain at home, I will watch the Olympics live or some replay videos.
If I wake up before 6:00 AM, I will go cycling along the Huangpu River again and return before 8:00 AM.
Because aAfter that, the temperatures will exceed 35°C.
After that, temperatures will exceed 35°C.
TheMy plan for Sunday is the same.
My plan for Sunday is the same.
Oh, I finished an article about last Saturday's hike in Chinese a few minutes ago.
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漂亮的摄影！我也喜欢钢琴音乐。
Aug. 3, 2024
非常感谢！我喜欢舒缓的钢琴曲，虽然我自己不会弹，哈哈哈
It'sRecently, it's been extremely hot recently in Shanghai and the surrounding areas.
Recently, it's been extremely hot in Shanghai and the surrounding areas.
Minor change, sounds slightly more natural.
My pet fish don't want to eat, just like me, even though we stayed in the air-conditioned room all the time. My pet fish don't want to eat, just like me, even though we stayed in the air-conditioned room all the time.
If it is multiple fish "don't" is fine. If it is one fish, then it has to be "doesn't"
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Hope things cool down soon!
I keep fish as well, and thankfully they can survive without eating for a while, but it's certainly worrisome and I hope their appetite comes back!
Very cool hike photos.
Aug. 3, 2024
Thank you so much!
Since I had more time to observe the little fish today, I found it was not that it doesn't want to eat, it eats my water grass!
It's extremely hot recently in Shanghai and the surrounding areas.
My pet fish don't want to eat, just like me, even though we stayed in themy air-conditioned room all the time.
My pet fish don't want to eat, just like me, even though we stay in my air-conditioned room all the time.
I have to give up my weekend hike plan.
I'm a little upset because if I can't wake up before 6:00 tomorrow morning, I'll have to stay home all day.
If I have to do that, I will watch the Olympics live or some replay videos. If I have to do that, I will watch the Olympics live or some replay videos.
You could also say "some videos of highlights."
If I wake up before 6:00 AM, I will go cycling along the Huangpu River again and return before 8:00 AM.
Because after that, the temperature will exceed 35°C.
Oh, I finished an article about last Saturday's hike in Chinese a few minutes ago.
If you want to see pictures or Chinese sentences, here is the link: https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/JwQpybH6QzUTJKDfbY7AOQ Have a nice weekend!
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Nicely written, I hope you're able to have a nice bike ride!
Aug. 3, 2024
Thanks for your corrections and feedback!
I wasn't able to ride this morning, not just because my waking up was a little late, but also because the sensible temperature was much higher than I had thought.
It's extremely hot recently in Shanghai and the surrounding areas.
My pet fish don't want to eat, just like me, even though we stayed in the air-conditioned room all the time. My pet fish don't want to eat, just like me, even though we stayed in the air-conditioned room all the time.
If you have multiple fish: this is correct. If you have only one fish, change "don't" for "doesn't"
I have to give up my weekend hike plan.
I'm a little upset because if I can't wake up before 6:00 tomorrow morning, I'll have to stay home all day.
If I have to do that, I will watch the Olympics live or watch some replay videos. If I have to do that, I will watch the Olympics live or watch some replay videos.
If I wake up before 6:00 AM, I will go cycling along the Huangpu River again and return before 8:00 AM.
Because after that, the temperature will exceed 35°C.
The plan for Sunday is the same.
Oh, I finished an article about last Saturday's hike in Chinese a few minutes ago.
If you want to see pictures or Chinese sentences, here is the link: https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/JwQpybH6QzUTJKDfbY7AOQ Have a nice weekend!
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Hope that the heat eases off soon! That is way too hot! Stay safe.
Aug. 3, 2024
Thank you so much!
It is extremely hot again today.
Have a nice weekend!
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It's extremely hot recently in Shanghai and the surrounding areas. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Minor change, sounds slightly more natural.
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My pet fish don't want to eat, just like me, even though we stayed in the air-conditioned room all the time. My pet fish don't want to eat, just like me, even though we stayed in the air-conditioned room all the time. My pet fish don't want to eat, just like me, even though we stayed in the air-conditioned room all the time. If you have multiple fish: this is correct. If you have only one fish, change "don't" for "doesn't"
My pet fish don't want to eat, just like me, even though we stay My pet fish don't want to eat, just like me, even though we stayed in the air-conditioned room all the time. My pet fish don't want to eat, just like me, even though we stayed in the air-conditioned room all the time. If it is multiple fish "don't" is fine. If it is one fish, then it has to be "doesn't"
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I have to give up my weekend hike plan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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I'm a little upset because if I can't wake up before 6:00 tomorrow morning, I'll have to stay home all day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If I have to do that, I will watch the Olympics live or some replay videos. If I have to do that, I will watch the Olympics live or watch some replay videos. If I have to do that, I will watch the Olympics live or watch some replay videos. If I have to do that, I will watch the Olympics live or some replay videos. If I have to do that, I will watch the Olympics live or some replay videos. You could also say "some videos of highlights."
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If I wake up before 6:00 AM, I will go cycling along the Huangpu River again and return before 8:00 AM. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because after that, the temperature will exceed 35°C. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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The plan for Sunday is the same. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Oh, I finished an article about last Saturday's hike in Chinese a few minutes ago. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If you want to see pictures or Chinese sentences, here is the link: https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/JwQpybH6QzUTJKDfbY7AOQ Have a nice weekend! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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