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Set out
Gradually, the sun sets. I dragged my luggage out of the door. The luggage is not too heavy, but it is substantial. The sunset appears little by little, and then disappears little by little. The driver who picked me up looked to be well over fifty. He smiled as he told me about the hardships of life, and I smiled too, teasing him.
渐渐地，太阳低落。我拖着行李从门口走出。行李不重，但有分量。晚霞一点点出现，又消失。送我过来的司机看上去已经年过半百，他笑着跟我说着生活的不易，我也笑着调侃他。
Set out
Gradually, the sun sets.
I dragged my luggage out of the door.
The luggage is not too heavy, but it is substantial.
The sunset appears little by little, and then disappears little by little.
The driver who picked me up looked to be well over fifty.
He smiled as he told me about the hardships of life, and I smiled too, teasing him.
Gradually, the sun sets. (in the sky).
The luggage is not too heavy, but it is substantial.does not make sense.
The sunset appears little by little, and then disappears little by little.Does not make sense
The driver who picked me up looked to be well over fifty. years-old.
He smiled as he told me about the hardships of life, andhis life. I smiled, too, teasing him.
Setting out
Gradually, the sun sets.
I dragged my luggage out of the door.
The luggage is not too heavy, but it is substantial.
The colours of the sunset appears little by little, and then disappears little by little.
Because the sunset is the sun, it sounds a little strange to say it's appearing while setting.
The driver who picked me up looked to be well over fifty.
He smiled as he told me about the hardships of life, and I smiled too, while teasing him.
today
Sorry, I just realised the tense is quite inconsistent. Lines one, three and four are present tense and lines two, five and six are past. This should be consistent and given the context, past tense.
E.g.
Gradually the sun set.
I dragged my luggage out of the door.
The luggage was not too heavy, but it was substantial.
The colours of the sunset appeared little by little and then disappeared little by little.
The driver who picked me up looked to be well over fifty.
He smiled as he told me about the hardships of life, and I smiled too while teasing him.
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The sunset appears little by little, and then disappears little by little. The colours of the sunset appear Because the sunset is the sun, it sounds a little strange to say it's appearing while setting.
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