Oct. 4, 2021
September 7 rally in Brasilia
On September 7, day of Brazil's Independence, a Bolsonaro supporters rally took place in front of Brazilian seat of government in Brasilia. The demonstrators intended to showcase that Bolsonaro still have the support of a considerable part of the population.
It is hard to state if the rally was a success or not, since the turnout was not revealed. On the one hand, people who oppose Bolsonaro say that as little as 5% of the people who are expected show up, and that the rally was a failure. On the other hand, his supporters say that the rally was crowded and that it was a success.
What can be stated at the moment is that currently Bolsonaro's popularity is in steep decline. Either if the rally was a success or a failure, he will need more than that to regain his popularity and try reelection next year.
On September 7, day of Brazil's Independence, a Bolsonaro supporters rally took place in front of the Brazilian seat of government in Brasilia.
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The demonstrators intended to showcase that Bolsonaro still haves the support of a considerable part of the population.
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On the one hand, people who oppose Bolsonaro say that as little as 5% of the people who awere expected showed up, and that the rally was a failure.
"was" --> "were", "show"--> "showed". Needs to be past tense
EiWhether if the rally was a success or a failure, he will need more than that to regain his popularity and try re-election next year.
"Either if" --> "Whether", sounds more natural. Re-election has a hyphen
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Oct. 4, 2021
Thanks a lot my friend! Regards from Brazil
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September 7 rally in Brasilia |
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On September 7, day of Brazil's Independence, a Bolsonaro supporters rally took place in front of Brazilian seat of government in Brasilia. On September 7, day of Brazil's Independence, a Bolsonaro supporters rally took place in front of the Brazilian seat of government in Brasilia. you need an article in front of the noun in this case |
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The demonstrators intended to showcase that Bolsonaro still have the support of a considerable part of the population. The demonstrators intended to showcase that Bolsonaro still ha has instead of have |
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It is hard to state if the rally was a success or not, since the turnout was not revealed. |
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On the one hand, people who oppose Bolsonaro say that as little as 5% of the people who are expected show up, and that the rally was a failure. On the one hand, people who oppose Bolsonaro say that as little as 5% of the people who "was" --> "were", "show"--> "showed". Needs to be past tense |
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On the other hand, his supporters say that the rally was crowded and that it was a success. |
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What can be stated at the moment is that currently Bolsonaro's popularity is in steep decline. |
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Either if the rally was a success or a failure, he will need more than that to regain his popularity and try reelection next year.
"Either if" --> "Whether", sounds more natural. Re-election has a hyphen |
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