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nambatsuyoshi

Sept. 6, 2021

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September 6th, 2021

I was watching a baseball game on TV last night. I am a fan of a team called the Hanshin. The Hanshin played against the Giants last night. Hanshin was six zero down to the Giants in the middle of the game, so I stopped watching the game. However, when I read the result in the newspaper this morning, I found that the game was a draw.


昨晩、レテビで野球を見ていました。私は阪神のファンです。昨晩、阪神は巨人と対戦しました。試合の途中で阪神が6対0で負けていたので、試合を見るのを止めました。しかし、今朝、新聞で結果を見ると、試合は引き分けになっていました。

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I was watchingtched a baseball game on TV last night.

However, when I read the result in the newspaper this morning, I found out that the game wasended in a draw.

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nambatsuyoshi

Feb. 6, 2022

4

Thank you!

September 6th, 2021

I was watching a baseball game on TV last night.

I am a fan of a team called the Hanshin.

Replacing Hanshin with a translation might be more natural.

The Hanshin played against the Giants last night.

Hanshin was sixdown zero downto six to the Giants in the middle of the game, so I stopped watching the game.

However, when I read the result in the newspaper this morning, I found that the game was a draw.

nambatsuyoshi's avatar
nambatsuyoshi

Sept. 6, 2021

4

Thank you!

September 6th, 2021


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I was watching a baseball game on TV last night.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was watchingtched a baseball game on TV last night.

I am a fan of a team called the Hanshin.


I am a fan of a team called the Hanshin.

Replacing Hanshin with a translation might be more natural.

The Hanshin played against the Giants last night.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Hanshin was six zero down to the Giants in the middle of the game, so I stopped watching the game.


Hanshin was sixdown zero downto six to the Giants in the middle of the game, so I stopped watching the game.

However, when I read the result in the newspaper this morning, I found that the game was a draw.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, when I read the result in the newspaper this morning, I found out that the game wasended in a draw.

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