Sept. 23, 2021
September 23th, 2021
Today is a national holiday, so I went to Toyono Cosmos Field this morning. There were about one million cosmos flowers there. They were very beautiful. I took some photos and a video using my smartphone.
Here is the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WQZSDauXUsc
今日は祝日なので、午前中は、とよのコスモスの里に行きました。そこには100万本くらいのコスモスがあります。とても綺麗でした。スマホで写真と動画を撮りました。
こちらがその動画です。https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WQZSDauXUsc
September 23th, 2021
Today is a national holiday, so I went to Toyono Cosmos Field this morning.
TAt Toyono Cosmos Field there were about one million cosmos flowers there.
Alternatively "There were about one million cosmos flowers at Toyono Cosmos Field."
The usage of 'There' twice in one sentence for the same grammatical reason sounds odd.
They were very beautiful.
I took some photos and a video using my smartphone.
Here is the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WQZSDauXUsc
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Weather looked nice!
Sept. 24, 2021
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Today is a national holiday, so I went to Toyono Cosmos Field this morning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There were about one million cosmos flowers there.
Alternatively "There were about one million cosmos flowers at Toyono Cosmos Field." The usage of 'There' twice in one sentence for the same grammatical reason sounds odd. |
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They were very beautiful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I took some photos and a video using my smartphone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Here is the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WQZSDauXUsc This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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