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nambatsuyoshi

Sept. 1, 2021

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September 1st, 2021

September has just started. I felt a little cool this morning in September. When I went for a walk early this morning, I heard crickets chirping. I feel autumn when I hear crickets chirping.


9月が始まりました。9月に入って朝が少し涼しくなりました。早朝ウォーキングに行ったら、コオロギが鳴いているのを聞きました。コオロギが鳴いているのを聞くと秋を感じます。

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I felt a little cooler this morning in September.

You don't need to repeat September because I already know what the subject is.

When I went for a walk early this morning, I heard crickets chirping.

It feels like autumn when I hear crickets chirping.

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It does not feel cool in Nagoya :(

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nambatsuyoshi

Sept. 1, 2021

4

Thank you!

September 1st, 2021

September has just started.

It would be natural to say 'It's the first day of September'.

I felt a little cool this morning in September.

When I went for a walk early this morning, I heard crickets chirping.

It feels like autumn when I hear crickets chirping.

nambatsuyoshi's avatar
nambatsuyoshi

Sept. 1, 2021

4

Thank you!

September 1st, 2021


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

September has just started.


September has just started.

It would be natural to say 'It's the first day of September'.

I felt a little cool this morning in September.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I felt a little cooler this morning in September.

You don't need to repeat September because I already know what the subject is.

When I went for a walk early this morning, I heard crickets chirping.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I feel autumn when I hear crickets chirping.


It feels like autumn when I hear crickets chirping.

It feels like autumn when I hear crickets chirping.

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