September 15th, 2021

nambatsuyoshi

Sept. 15, 2021

I read an article about apartments in the newspaper this morning. According to the article, recently, it seems that the number of wooden high-rise apartments are increasing. After I read this article, I remembered the old temple called Horyuji in Nara. The temple was built about 1,400 years ago. Earthquakes often occur in Japan. The temple has experienced 46 earthquakes with a magnitude of 7.0 or higher and has survived. The reason is that the temple has an amazing seismic structure.

今朝、新聞でマンションに関する記事を読みました。その記事によると、最近、木造の高層マンションが増えているそうです。この記事を読んで、奈良にある法隆寺を思い出しました。この寺は約1400年前に建てられました。日本は地震が多いです。法隆寺はマグニチュード7以上地震を46回経験し、乗り越えてきました。その理由は、この寺が驚くべき耐震構造をしているからです。

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smiler

September 15th, 2021

I read an article about apartments in the newspaper this morning.

According to the article, recently, it seems that the number of wooden high-rise apartments are increasing.

After I read this article, I remembered the old temple called Horyuji in Nara.

The temple was built about 1,400 years ago.

Earthquakes often occur in Japan.

The temple has experienced 46 earthquakes with a magnitude of 7.0 or higher and has survived.

The reason is that the temple has an amazing seismic structure.

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Nicely written. I feel like it is missing a conclusion though. Something like; "Therefore I am not worried about the wooden high-rise apartments to come"

nambatsuyoshi

Sept. 15, 2021

Thank you!

September 15th, 2021