Sept. 12, 2021
September 12th, 2021
I rode my motorcycle to Hiyoshi Dam this morning. It is about 30 kilometers from my house. When I went through the countryside, it felt very good. It was cloudy today, and after I got home, it started to rain. I uploaded some photos on Instagram.
Here are the photos: https://www.instagram.com/p/CTtKzaDvSlQ/
午前中、バイクで日吉ダムまで行きました。うちから30Kmくらいです。田舎を通ってると、とても気持ちが良かったです。今日は曇っていましたが、家に着くと雨が降り出しました。インスタに何枚か写真をアップロードしました。
こちらが写真です。
https://www.instagram.com/p/CTtKzaDvSlQ/
September 12th, 2021
I rode my motorcycle to Hiyoshi Dam this morning.
It is about 30 kilometers from my house.
When I wentpassed through the countryside, it felt very good.
You could be more descriptive. What specifically felt good? The sensations? Escaping the house? Adding specifics makes your English sound more natural.
It was cloudy today, and after I got home, it started to rain.
I uploaded some photos ton Instagram.
Here are the photos: https://www.instagram.com/p/CTtKzaDvSlQ/
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Sept. 12, 2021
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When I went through the countryside, it felt very good. When I You could be more descriptive. What specifically felt good? The sensations? Escaping the house? Adding specifics makes your English sound more natural. |
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It was cloudy today, and after I got home, it started to rain. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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