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Oct. 2, 2023

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Journal #12: "How I'm Learning English"

I told you how I watched the movie "Shrek" at last journal. I forgot to tell you about one more English serial. It name is "Blue Mountain State". I started to watch it at last weekend. I saw first three series. It was so funny and giggle. I think I can't told about the story or some interesting moments, because it's PG-16. So, if you want to watch this serial, you're welcome. You can find this in intenet.

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It's name is "Blue Mountain State".

Journal #12: "How I'm Learning English"

I told you how I watched the movie "Shrek" at last journal.

I told you how I watched the movie "Shrek" atin my last journal. I told you how I watched the movie "Shrek" in my last journal.

"At" is more for a place. "In my" is correct in this instance.

I told you how I watched the movie "Shrek" atin my last journal. I told you how I watched the movie "Shrek" in my last journal.

I forgot to tell you about one more English serial.

I forgot to tell you about one more English seriales. I forgot to tell you about one more English series.

I forgot to tell you about one more English seriales. I forgot to tell you about one more English series.

It name is "Blue Mountain State".

It's name is "Blue Mountain State". It's name is "Blue Mountain State".

Its name is "Blue Mountain State". Its name is "Blue Mountain State".

I started to watch it at last weekend.

I started to watch it at last weekend. I started to watch it last weekend.

No need for the "at".

I started to watch it aing it last weekend. I started watching it last weekend.

I saw first three series.

I saw the first three series. I saw the first three series.

I think you mean episodes?

I saw the first three seriepisodes. I saw the first three episodes.

Series is for the whole show, episode is for each smaller part.

It was so funny and giggle.

It was so funny and giggle. It was so funny.

To giggle is a verb to laugh in a girlish way.

It was so funny and I giggled. It was so funny and I giggled.

Giggled is like a small laugh, maybe "I laughed" would be more natural ;)

I think I can't told about the story or some interesting moments, because it's PG-16.

I don't think I can't told tell you about the story or some interesting moments, from it because it's PG-16. I don't think I can tell you about the story or interesting moments from it because it's PG-16.

I think I can't toldell you about the story or some of the interesting moments, because it's PG-16. I think I can't tell you about the story or some of the interesting moments, because it's PG-16.

So, if you want to watch this serial, you're welcome.

So, if you want to watch this seriales, you're welcome. to! So, if you want to watch this series, you're welcome to!

So, if you want to watch this seriales, you're welcome. So, if you want to watch this series, you're welcome.

You can find this in intenet.

You can find this init on the internet. You can find it on the internet.

You can find this init on the internet. You can find it on the internet.

Thanks for raeading my journal.

Thanks for raeading my journal. Thanks for reading my journal.

Thanks for raeading my journal. Thanks for reading my journal.

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