Nov. 2, 2024
Sentences that touched my heart today
Today, when I was browsing Weibo, some sentences deeply touched me.
They were from an interview with Wanghaoze, the third Chinese woman to participate in a crewed spaceflight mission.
She recounted a story from her time in grad school. Her advisor gave her a challenging project. She asked her advisor why she needed to do this since she might not be a scientist.
Her advisor told her, "I don't expect you to have to do scientific research, but you must do everything you do now seriously. Whether you like it or not, whether it's your life's work or not. You should get into the habit of doing things seriously. Otherwise, by the time you meet something you like, you have no habit of doing things seriously."
Wang said these sentences have changed her life.
And they did touch me when I watched the video.
At times in my life, I felt too tired to engage fully in my tasks. Sometimes, I believed the work I was doing was not important enough, so I completed it without putting in my best effort.
At that time, I thought myself clever and adaptable.
Maybe I was wrong, many times.
今天刷微博时，几句话深深地打动了我。
这些话来自对王浩泽的采访。王浩泽是第三位参加载人航天飞行任务的中国女性。
她讲了一个她读研时候的故事。她的导师给了她一个很难的项目。她问导师，为什么她要做这个，她将来都不一定从事科研工作。
她的导师告诉她：“我不指望你一定要搞科研，但是你现在做的每一件事，你都一定要认真地去做。不管你喜不喜欢它，不管它是不是你终身的事业。你要养成这个认真做事的习惯。不然的话，等以后你遇到了你喜欢的事，你已经没有认真做事的习惯了。”
王说，这些话改变了她的人生。
我看视频的时候结结实实地被触动了。
在我的生活中，有时我觉得太累，就不全心地投入了。还有些时候，我觉得自己正在做的工作没那么重要，就不付出最大的努力去完成它。
那时，我觉得自己很聪明，适应性强。
也许我错了，很多次。
Sentences that touched my heart today
Today, when I was browsing Weibo, some sentences deeply touched me. deeply.
They were from an interview with Wanghaoze, the third Chinese woman to participate in a crewed spaceflight mission.
She recounted a story from her time in grad school.
Her advisor gave her a challenging project.
She asked her advisor why she needed to do this since she might not become a scientist.
Her advisor told her, "I don't expect you to have to do scientific research, but you must do everything you do now seriously.
Whether you like it or not, whether it's your life's work or not.
You should get into the habit of doing things seriously.
Otherwise, by the time you meetfind something you like, you have nowill not be in the habit of doing things seriously."
Wang said these sentences have changed her life.
And they did touch me when I watched the video.
At times in my life, I feelt too tired to engage fully in my tasks.
Sometimes, I believed the work I was doing was not important enough, so I completed it without putting in my best effort.
At that time, I thought myself clever and adaptable.
Maybe I was wrong, many timesmany times, I was wrong.
Nov. 5, 2024
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
Today, when I was browsing Weibo, some sentences deeply touched me deeply.
More natural word order.
They were from an interview with Wangh Haoze, the third Chinese woman to participate in a crewed spaceflight mission.
First and last names separate.
She recounted a story from her time in grad school.
Her advisor gave her a challenging project.
She asked her advisor why she needed to do this since she might not be a scientist.
Her advisor told her, "I don't expect you to have to do scientific research, but you must do everything you do now seriously.
Whether you like it or not, whether it's your life's work or not.
You should get into the habit of doing things seriously.
Otherwise, by the time you meetfind something you like, you have no habit of doing things seriously."
More natural world selection.
Wang said these sentences have changed her life.
And they did touched me when I watched the video.
Your sentence is not necessarily incorrect, but it sounds more natural to say "touched".
At times in my life, I felt too tired to engage fully in my tasks.
Sometimes, I believed the work I was doing was not important enough, so I completed it without putting in my best effort.
At that time, I thought myself clever and adaptable.
Maybe I was wrong, many times.
Feedback
Good use of commas/punctuation, just a few minor things.
Nov. 2, 2024
Thank you so much!
Have a nice weekend!
Sentences that touched my heart today
Today, when I was browsing Weibo, some sentences deeply touched me.
They were from an interview with Wangh Haoze, the third Chinese woman to participate in a crewed spaceflight mission.
She recounted a story from her time in grad school.
Her advisor gave her a challenging project.
She asked her advisor why she needed to do this since she might not be a scientist.
Her advisor told her, "I don't expect you to have to do scientific researchbecome a research scientist, but you must do everything you do now seriously.
More natural.
Whether you like it or not, whether it's your life's work or not, you should get in the habit of doing things seriously.
Otherwise, by the time you meetfind something you like, you have no’ll lack the habit of doing things seriously."
You could also say “…you won’t have the habit of….”
“You have no habit of…” is unnatural but still perfectly understandable.
Wang said these sentences have changed her life.
And they did touch me when I watched the video.
At times in my life, I felt too tired to engage fully in my tasks.
Sometimes, I believed the work I was doing was not important enough, so I completed it without putting in my best effort.
At that time, I thought myself clever and adaptable.
Maybe I was wrong, many times.
Nov. 2, 2024
Thank you so much!
Have a nice weekend!
Sentences that touched my heart today
Today, when I was browsing Weibo, some sentences deeply touched me.
They were from an interview with Wanghaoze, the third Chinese woman to participate in a crewed spaceflight mission.
She recounted a story from her time in grad school.
Her advisor gave her a challenging project.
She asked her advisor why she needed to do this since she might not be a scientist.
Her advisor told her, "I don't expect you to have to do scientific research, but you must do everything you do now seriously.
Whether you like it or not, whether it's your life's work or not.
You should get into the habit of doing things seriously.
Otherwise, by the time you meetfind something you like, you have no habit of doing things seriously."
Wang said these sentences have changed her life.
And they did touch me when I watched the video.
At times in my life, I felt too tired to engage fully in my tasks.
Sometimes, I believed the work I was doing was not important enough, so I completed it without putting in my best effort.
At that time, I thought myself clever and adaptable.
Maybe I was wrong, many times.
Nov. 2, 2024
Thank you so much!
Have a nice weekend!
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