April 17, 2022
Sentences I want to be corrected 3
1)Our current office does not have a meeting room.
significantly
2) I lied my son down yesterday because it was time to go to sleep.
3)´´Some people choose taking a plane since It is cheaper thanks to globalization´´ or ´´some people prefer traveling by plane since It is cheaper thanks to globalization´´.
4- people feel the need to travel because lately there is a great influence of the media.
5 -I would like to travel to norway to see the northern lights
6- Improved transportation is what has contributed most to the increase in international travel.
7- you might be able to find a good spot on the train if you get on it at an early time of the day.
8- I can be in france in hour thanks to high speed train
9- One of the most efficient tools to travel are airplanes.
1-Nuestra oficina actual no tiene una sala de reuniones.
2) Mentí a mi hijo en la cama ayer porque era hora de dormir.
3- which phrase is more apropriate
4-la gente siente la necesidad de viajar porque ultimamente existe una gran influencia de los medios de comunicacion.
5-quisiera viajar a noruega para contemplar la aurora boreal
6-La mejora del transporte es lo que ha contribuido mas al incremento de los viajes internationales.
7-Podrias ser capaz de encontrar un buen sitio en el tren si te montas a una hora temprana del dia.
8-Puedo estar en francia en una hora gracias al tren de alta velocidad.
9-una de las más eficientes herramientas para viajar son los aviones.
1) Our current office does not have a meeting room.
significantly
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2) I lieday my son down yesterday because it was time to go to sleep.
3)´´Some people choose taking a plane since Iit is cheaper thanks to globalization´´ or ´´some people prefer traveling by plane since Iit is cheaper thanks to globalization´´.
the latter sounds better but both are correct
5 -I would like to travel to nNorway to see the northern lights
6- Improved transportation is what has contributed most to the increase in international travel.
8- I can be in fFrance in an hour thanks to high speed trains
Sentences I want to be corrected 3
1)Our current office does not have a meeting room.
significantly
2) I lieday my son down yesterday because it was time to go to sleep.
Time to sleep/Time to go to bed seems to be combined here.
3)´´Some people choose takingo take a plane asince It is cheaper thanksdue to globalization´´ or ´´some people prefer traveling by plane asince It is cheaper thanksdue to globalization´´.
4- people feel the need to travel because lately there is a grealately due to significant influence ofrom the media.
5 -I would like to travel to norway to see the northern lights
6- Improved transportation is what has contributed most to the increase in international travel.
7- you might be able to find a good spot on the train if you get on it at an early time ofearly in the day.
8- I can be in france in a hour thanks to a/the high speed train.
9- One of the most efficient tools tofor travel are airplanes.
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You did great! Mainly just little tweaks here and there.
Sentences I want to bhave corrected 3(3)
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2) I laied my son down yesterday because it was time to go to sleep.
3)´´Some people choose taking a plane since It is cheaper thanks to globalization´´ or ´´s Some people prefer traveling by plane ever since Iit isbecame cheaper thanksdue to globalization´´.
The 2nd version. The changes are just what I think would sound more natural.
4 - pPeople feel the need to travel because lately, there is a greathas been a lot of influence ofrom the media.
5 - I would like to travel to nNorway to see the northern lights
7 - yYou might be able to find a good spot on the train if you get on it at an early time of the day.
8 - I can be in fFrance in hour thanks to high speed trains.
9- - One of the most efficient tools tofor travel areing is airplanes.
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Sentences I want to be corrected 3 Sentences I want to Sentences I want to be corrected |
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1)Our current office does not have a meeting room. This sentence has been marked as perfect! 1) Our current office does not have a meeting room. |
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2) I lied my son down yesterday because it was time to go to sleep. 2) I lai 2) I l Time to sleep/Time to go to bed seems to be combined here. 2) I l |
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3)´´Some people choose taking a plane since It is cheaper thanks to globalization´´ or ´´some people prefer traveling by plane since It is cheaper thanks to globalization´´. 3) The 2nd version. The changes are just what I think would sound more natural. 3)´´Some people choose t 3)´´Some people choose taking a plane since the latter sounds better but both are correct |
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4- people feel the need to travel because lately there is a great influence of the media. 4 - 4- people feel the need to travel |
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5 -I would like to travel to norway to see the northern lights 5 - I would like to travel to This sentence has been marked as perfect! 5 -I would like to travel to |
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6- Improved transportation is what has contributed most to the increase in international travel. 6- Improved transportation This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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7- you might be able to find a good spot on the train if you get on it at an early time of the day. 7 - 7- you might be able to find a good spot on the train if you get on it |
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8- I can be in france in hour thanks to high speed train 8 - I can be in 8- I can be in france in a hour thanks to a/the high speed train. 8- I can be in |
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9- One of the most efficient tools to travel are airplanes. 9 9- One of the most efficient tools |
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