Oct. 30, 2022
https://langcorrect.com/journal/sentence-4/#correction-user-6568
I posted the topic yesterday. I want to thanks everyone who has helped me. But I am so sorry I didn't understand your corrections. I know is my fault. I know I am not able to explain you what I wanted to say.
I'll try once again and I hope to understand me.
First of all, Before my mom returning to Algiers.You can imagine the conversation between Mother and I.
Courageuse19: I asked her a favor. Mom! Can you accept to introduce my friend through my camera on Skype?
Mom: Yes, I do!
Mom and I : I opened my camera on skype and I introduced mom to my friend.
So, my Mom was delighted to see my friend throught camera on Skype and also my friend was happy to see my mother.
Now, I want to write after my mom has arrived to algiers. I am sure. My sentences are very understand.
In this morning, Mom called me.She wanted to thanks me because I introduced her to my friend through camera on Skype. She told me, she was delighted to see my friend who I talk every Sunday on Skype. To be honest, I am very delighted to share this moment with my mother.
I posted theis topic yesterday.
I want to again thanks everyone who has helped me so far/thus far.
But I am so sorrUnfortunately I didn'’t understand any of your corrections.
I know is my fault.
I know I am not able to explain to you what Iit was I actually wanted to say.
I'll try once again and I hope tohat you’ll understand me.
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Courageuse19: I asked her a favor.
Mom!
Can you accept tolet me introduce you to my friend through my camera on Skype?
Mom: Yes, I doSure!
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So, mMy Mmom was delighted to smeet my friend throught camera on Skype and also my friend was happy to see my motherand vice versa.
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I didn’t understand, please tell me what you were trying to say.
I am sure.
My sentences are very understandable.
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She told me, she was delighted to see mymeet the friend who I talk’ve been talking to every Sunday on Skype for the past month/year.
You need a time period in this phrase ^
To be honest, I amfelt very delighted to share this moment with my motherbe there for their conversation.
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If you don’t understand someone’s corrections, please reply to them asking for further clarification and do not feel like a burden for doing so! We are all happy to help you on your English journey if you only just ask, I ask all the time with my journals!!! It is normal to experience this in learning, and sometimes people explain things in a way we can’t understand, but all we have to do is ask for a different way and voila!
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https://langcorrect.com/journal/sentence-4/#correction-user-6568
I posted theabout this topic yesterday.
I want to thanks everyone who has helped me.
But I am so sorry I didon't understand your corrections all the time.
"But" is used to say the opposite of a previous thought. Apologizing here doesn't contrast with your previous sentence so I removed it.
I know this is my fault.
I know I am not able to explain you what I wanted to say.
I'll try once again and I hope to be more easily understand meood.
First of all, Before my mom is returning to Algiers. You can imagine the conversation between Mother and Is we've had.
Courageuse19: I asked herMe, asking a favor.:
Mom!
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I turned on my camera on Skype and introduced my mom to my friend.
So, my Mmom was delighted to smeet my friend throught camera on Skype and also my friend also was happy to smeet my mother.
Now, I want to write after my mom has arrived to ain Algiers.
I am sure my sentences are somewhat difficult to understand.
"I am sure" needs more explanation so I added the next sentence to it.
My sentences are very understand.
In tThis morning, Mom called me. She wanted to thanks me because I introduced her to my friend through camera on Skype.
She told me, she was delighted to see my friend with whom I talk every Sunday on Skype.
To be honest, I am very delighted to share this moment with my mother.
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Very good work!
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I posted the topic yesterday. I posted I posted th |
I want to thanks everyone who has helped me. I want to thank I want to again thank |
But I am so sorry I didn't understand your corrections.
"But" is used to say the opposite of a previous thought. Apologizing here doesn't contrast with your previous sentence so I removed it.
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I know is my fault. I know this is my fault. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I know I am not able to explain you what I wanted to say. I know I am not able to explain I know I am not able to explain to you what |
I'll try once again and I hope to understand me. I'll try once again and I hope to be more easily underst I'll try once again and I hope t |
First of all, Before my mom returning to Algiers.You can imagine the conversation between Mother and I. First of all, First of all, |
Courageuse19: I asked her a favor.
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Can you accept to introduce my friend through my camera on Skype?
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Mom: Yes, I do! Mom: Yes, Mom: |
Mom and I : I opened my camera on skype and I introduced mom to my friend.
or I turned on my camera on Skype and introduced my mom to my friend.
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So, my Mom was delighted to see my friend throught camera on Skype and also my friend was happy to see my mother. So, my
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Now, I want to write after my mom has arrived to algiers. Now, I want to write after my mom has arrived
I didn’t understand, please tell me what you were trying to say. |
I am sure. I am sure my sentences are somewhat difficult to understand. "I am sure" needs more explanation so I added the next sentence to it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
My sentences are very understand.
My sentences are very understandable. |
In this morning, Mom called me.She wanted to thanks me because I introduced her to my friend through camera on Skype.
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She told me, she was delighted to see my friend who I talk every Sunday on Skype. She told me, she was delighted to see my friend with whom I talk every Sunday on Skype. She told me You need a time period in this phrase ^ |
To be honest, I am very delighted to share this moment with my mother. This sentence has been marked as perfect! To be honest, I |
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