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heyyawn

July 4, 2021

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Sentences 13 – 15

1. The obvious similarities of these sensory fields to each other seemed much more remarkable than any of the minute differences.
2. As someone become familiar, you get to know their personality better.
3. In large part as a consequence of the feminist movement, scholars have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on determing more accurately the contribution of women in various periods.

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Sentences 13 – 15

1. The obvious similarities of these sensory fields to each other seemed much more remarkable than any of their minute differences.

2. As someone becomes familiar, you get to know their personality better.

I made a correction regarding the verb conjugation, however, I personally wouldn't phrase this sentence this way. I would say:
"As you get to know someone, you learn more about their personality."

3. In large part as a consequence of the feminist movement, scholars have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on determining more accurately the contribution of women in various time periods.

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heyyawn

July 5, 2021

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Thanks :)

Sentences 13 – 15


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Other experiments revealed slight variations in the size, number, arrangement , and interconnection of the nerve cells, but as far as psychoneural correlations were con- :


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: cerned, the obvious similarities of these sensory fields to :


: each other seemed much more remarkable than any of the :


: minute differences.


1. The obvious similarities of these sensory fields to each other seemed much more remarkable than any of the minute differences.


1. The obvious similarities of these sensory fields to each other seemed much more remarkable than any of their minute differences.

2. As someone become familiar, you get to know their personality better.


2. As someone becomes familiar, you get to know their personality better.

I made a correction regarding the verb conjugation, however, I personally wouldn't phrase this sentence this way. I would say: "As you get to know someone, you learn more about their personality."

3. In large part as a consequence of the feminist movement, scholars have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on determing more accurately the contribution of women in various periods.


3. In large part as a consequence of the feminist movement, scholars have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on determining more accurately the contribution of women in various time periods.

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