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joaorocha

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Sentences 09-12-2022 "Feedbacks please, I love it :)"

You should pay more attention while driving, hand me the driving of the car now!
An advice for you: You must be careful (take care?) at handing out candies for children, otherwise you can be misinterpreted. But everyone here wishes you good luck at your good will action, I gess everything will be ok.
Guess you what, I think you deserve to be the CEO of this company. Can you believe in me, you earned the respect of everybody here whith your earnesness.
My little brother is a picky eater, but is not his fault, he has been raised that way, by eating just what he want instead of been taught to eat healthy food.
This idea do not smells good!

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Sentences 09-12-2022 (12/9/2022) "Feedbacks please,. I love it :)"

In the US, December 9th is 12/9/2022. 09-12-2022 means September 12th.

"Feedback" is uncountable.

You should pay more attention while driving, hand me. Hand the driving of the car over to me now!

An piece of advice for you: You must be careful (or: take care?) atwhen handing out candies for/candy to children, otherwise you canould be misunderstood / your actions could be misinterpreted.

"Advice" is uncountable.

"Take care" is OK, too.

But everyone here wishes you good luck at your good will action, so I guess everything will be ok.

"At your goodwill action" sounds strange, but I guess it's OK.

Guess you what, I think you deserve to be the CEO of this company.

CanIf you can believe in me, you earned the respect of everybody here whith your earnestness.

My little brother is a picky eater, but is not his fault, he has been raised that way, by eating just what he wants instead of been taught to eat healthy food.

This idea does not smells good!

Feedback

Well done.

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joaorocha

Dec. 20, 2022

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Thank you a lot!

Sentences 09-12-2022 "Feedbacks, please,. I would love it! :)"

You should pay more attention while driving, h. Hand me the driving ofover the carkeys now!

AnSome advice for you: You must be careful (take care?) at handing out candies fory to children, otherwise you canr behavior could be misinterpreted.

or

Some advice for you: You must take care while handing out candy to children, otherwise your behavior could be misinterpreted.

But eEveryone here wishes you good luck atwith your good will action,efforts. I guess everything will be okay.

I don't know exactly what a "good will action" is so this correction is my best guess.

Guess you what, I think you deserve to be the CEO of this company.

Can you believe in me, yt? You earned the respect of everybody here whith your earnestness.

My little brother is a picky eater, but it is not his fault, h. He has been raised that way, by eating just what he wants instead of beening taught to eat healthy food.

This idea do es not smellslook good!

Feedback

Good work!

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joaorocha

Dec. 20, 2022

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Thank you!

Sentences 09-12-2022 "Feedbacks please, I love it :)"


Sentences 09-12-2022 "Feedbacks, please,. I would love it! :)"

Sentences 09-12-2022 (12/9/2022) "Feedbacks please,. I love it :)"

In the US, December 9th is 12/9/2022. 09-12-2022 means September 12th. "Feedback" is uncountable.

You should pay more attention while driving, hand me the driving of the car now!


You should pay more attention while driving, h. Hand me the driving ofover the carkeys now!

You should pay more attention while driving, hand me. Hand the driving of the car over to me now!

An advice for you: You must be careful (take care?) at handing out candies for children, otherwise you can be misinterpreted.


AnSome advice for you: You must be careful (take care?) at handing out candies fory to children, otherwise you canr behavior could be misinterpreted.

or Some advice for you: You must take care while handing out candy to children, otherwise your behavior could be misinterpreted.

An piece of advice for you: You must be careful (or: take care?) atwhen handing out candies for/candy to children, otherwise you canould be misunderstood / your actions could be misinterpreted.

"Advice" is uncountable. "Take care" is OK, too.

But everyone here wishes you good luck at your good will action, I gess everything will be ok.


But eEveryone here wishes you good luck atwith your good will action,efforts. I guess everything will be okay.

I don't know exactly what a "good will action" is so this correction is my best guess.

But everyone here wishes you good luck at your good will action, so I guess everything will be ok.

"At your goodwill action" sounds strange, but I guess it's OK.

Guess you what, I think you deserve to be the CEO of this company.


Guess you what, I think you deserve to be the CEO of this company.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Can you believe in me, you earned the respect of everybody here whith your earnesness.


Can you believe in me, yt? You earned the respect of everybody here whith your earnestness.

CanIf you can believe in me, you earned the respect of everybody here whith your earnestness.

My little brother is a picky eater, but is not his fault, he has been raised that way, by eating just what he want instead of been taught to eat healthy food.


My little brother is a picky eater, but it is not his fault, h. He has been raised that way, by eating just what he wants instead of beening taught to eat healthy food.

My little brother is a picky eater, but is not his fault, he has been raised that way, by eating just what he wants instead of been taught to eat healthy food.

This idea do not smells good!


This idea do es not smellslook good!

This idea does not smells good!

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