March 21, 2021
Sentences 054: Workshop, Sticking To Guns, Ruffled Feathers
By and large, the workshop was super successful, but the second hour was a bit messy.
There was lots of negative feedback, but she sticks to her guns and publishes it as she thinks it's right.
His feathers were definitely ruffled when she got promoted and not him.
Sentences 054: Workshop, Sticking To Guns, Ruffled Feathers
By and large, the workshop was super successful, but the second hour was a bit messy.
There was lots of negative feedback, but she stiucks to her guns and publishesd it as she thinks it's right. She thought it was the right thing to do.
Inconsistent tense, the sentence was too long.
His feathers were definitely ruffled when she got promoted and not him.
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Very good! Keep in mind what tense you're writing in and the length of your sentences.
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Sentences 054: Workshop, Sticking To Guns, Ruffled Feathers This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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By and large, the workshop was super successful, but the second hour was a bit messy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There was lots of negative feedback, but she sticks to her guns and publishes it as she thinks it's right. There was lots of negative feedback, but she st Inconsistent tense, the sentence was too long. |
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His feathers were definitely ruffled when she got promoted and not him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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