March 16, 2021
Sentences 049: Roped Into, Dejected, Glum
I've just been roped into this affair, I never planned to cheat on him.
She received the rejection letter in the morning and looked dejected for the rest of the day.
He looked so glum when he lost all his money on Black Friday.
Sentences 049: Roped Into, Dejected, Glum
I've just been roped into this affair,; I never planned to cheat on him.
A semicolon would be better since you're using two independent clauses. Also, I removed "just" because "Just" implies that the action happened right now without more context. In the right context, "just" can work though.
She received the rejection letter in the morning and looked dejected for the rest of the day.
He looked so glum when he lost all his money on Black Friday.
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I've just been roped into this affair, I never planned to cheat on him. I've A semicolon would be better since you're using two independent clauses. Also, I removed "just" because "Just" implies that the action happened right now without more context. In the right context, "just" can work though. |
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She received the rejection letter in the morning and looked dejected for the rest of the day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He looked so glum when he lost all his money on Black Friday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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