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Sentences 005: Speaking publicly, good book, great talker

She used to be a shy person, but now she is really poised to accept any invitation to speak at conferences.

I was so bowled over by her new book that I plugged it in an article on Linkedin.

My grandfather really had the gift of the gab, his daughter did not take after him and tries to avoid all social interactions.


(I'm aiming to replicate spoken colloquial English and am always interested to learn whether the correction is in American or British English ☺️)

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Sentences 005: Speaking publicly, good book, great talker

She used to be a shy person, but nso she took speaking lessons. Now she is really poised to accept any invitation to speak at conferences.

To be poised to do something usually implies that a preceding action set you up to do the next thing. It is hard to explain, but it feels like a step is missing here. In the correction above, I added a phrase that I think makes it sound more natural (American English).

I was so blowled overn away by her new book that I plugged it in an article on Linkedin.

I personally haven't heard the phrase "bowled over", but I'm not saying it doesn't exist. Instead of "bowled over by", I would probably say "blown away by" in American English.

Also, when I first read this, I imagined you literally plugged a book into an electrical outlet (plugged it in) :). But with more context it would make sense. That's the right usage of plug, as in to promote something.

My grandfather really had the gift of the gab, but his daughter did not take after him and tries to avoid all social interactions.

I don't hear it very often, but I think the expression is "the gift of gab" in American English at least.
With just a comma, it's a run-on sentence. Adding "but" makes the two ideas flow more naturally.

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I really like the idea of practicing colloquial expressions. I made a few tweaks to try to make them sound more natural. I was still able to understand what you were trying to say though!

Sentences 005: Speaking publicly, good book, great talker


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She used to be a shy person, but now she is really poised to accept any invitation to speak at conferences.


She used to be a shy person, but nso she took speaking lessons. Now she is really poised to accept any invitation to speak at conferences.

To be poised to do something usually implies that a preceding action set you up to do the next thing. It is hard to explain, but it feels like a step is missing here. In the correction above, I added a phrase that I think makes it sound more natural (American English).

I was so bowled over by her new book that I plugged it in an article on Linkedin.


I was so blowled overn away by her new book that I plugged it in an article on Linkedin.

I personally haven't heard the phrase "bowled over", but I'm not saying it doesn't exist. Instead of "bowled over by", I would probably say "blown away by" in American English. Also, when I first read this, I imagined you literally plugged a book into an electrical outlet (plugged it in) :). But with more context it would make sense. That's the right usage of plug, as in to promote something.

My grandfather really had the gift of the gab, his daughter did not take after him and tries to avoid all social interactions.


My grandfather really had the gift of the gab, but his daughter did not take after him and tries to avoid all social interactions.

I don't hear it very often, but I think the expression is "the gift of gab" in American English at least. With just a comma, it's a run-on sentence. Adding "but" makes the two ideas flow more naturally.

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